Street Game
by Bear_Music

Comment:
redirection?

A Pearable
by vawendy

Comment:
Not sure which one you're going for here. i think it's a fantastic story though.

Camera Obscura
by brucedgates

Comment:
ends?

That's my boy
by timfythetoo

Comment:
pride

The pictures make a word...can you solve it?
by sjhuls

Comment:
Not sure what you're going for here.
i like the images, great story. The pigtails in the 2nd one make this a 'great' story instead of a 'good' story as it adds a good amount of cartoonish humor :)

A deep feeling of....
by david_c

Comment:
happiness

Enjoy
by Alex_Petrini

Comment:
Vast/empty/infinite/open

Intolerable
by pamb

Comment:
Unsure what exactly you're going for here - violence, pain, abuse, anger, resentment, broken, rough...
overall this picture is technically sound but too dark for my taste - the notion of abusing the young girl is unforgivable to me as an action; the red border makes the eyes look very evil in the first frame, yet do not stand out enough for the rest of the image to be distinct borders when focusing on the subject of the image.
i'd give this a 6 on the technicals overall (8 for the photographic skill) but a 1 if i was voting for 'what this image stirs in me'. i'm quite torn on how to vote it as i don't like promoting this for the content (despite the fact the title says it's intolerable), but would hate to see it end up too low as it has better technicals than many others i've seen...

Gotcha!
by Jutilda

Comment:
Not sure what mystery word you're going for here: fetch, play, toy, success, achievement....
I like the story, though the first one is too dark in my opinion - more detail on the head would be better - 1/2 or more of the face is lost in shadow, and too much of the rest of the frame is negative space.

The Bird or the Vehicle
by cloudsme

Comment:
Great capture on the hummingbird, especially in the middle with both wings "stopped" cleanly.
I'd guess your word is hummingbird, but i don't recall having heard of that vehicle