Winegrower Demonstration 2
by jjbeguin

Comment:
Great placement of teh bodies; I mean- you recognized it spacially and the eye just flows nice from the smiling guy in the right (middle)foreground, to teh guy with the leather moto-jacket on the left; and the n back to the right front to the guy whose nose leads us off the front of the shot. and then- all of the people in the back who are looking at your camera. nice movement of the eyes, tones of black and white. great observance.

Message edited by author 2007-04-30 08:39:56.

On Stand-By
by Jas

Comment:
Excellent green; vibrant, deep rich, lush and detailed;
This definitely has elements of an alien landscape; great scale and spacial feeling- but I don't need to say all this; you won the ribbon!

study of a young woman
by silverfoxx

Comment:
Absolutely great; your eyes burn through the viewer- as if you are willingly caught and are false-chastising the voyeur-
The light, the crispness of the face and flowing of the headdress are also exquisite.

I'm sure you are used to many compliments on your work, especially your self portraits; so for lack of a way to separate this out from all the others... nice work.

Captive
by kawesttex

Comment:
Really subtle; really nice; great shot. You have to look at it a while, but the feeling comes through and the darkness is nice.

Rush
by Tiberius

Comment:
I love this; its so city, so frantic, so unplanned but serendipitus; right place, right time, nice execution. great capture!

The Chill
by pepitoid

Comment:
Nice early Demi Moore look; interesting pose. great compostiion and placement in the frame. The elbows are a bit distracting, but the eye moves nicely from the hair to the belt and then to the face behind the hair. Nice work- good luck for a ribbon.

Shades of my life
by Blackstarlight0

Comment:
Is that a sweater wrapped around your waist? Your clothing and the doorstop are really distracting. I don't mean that you need to be naked, just somehow less "commonly" dressed. Sorry for the personal criticism- its just that this really could have been a ten, a ribbon, and taken to the next level.

Fire in a Bottle
by dahved

Comment:
Fantastic; very nice and impressionist; perhaps the problem is color here, if there is any problem. You have the red but its not really a warm firey glow- and then that stark purple. TO me, that really distracts from the beautiful reflection and makes this a technical rather than art driven shot. Good luck though.

Bromelain & Vitamin C Elevation
by Xilebo

Comment:
I admire your courage; I don't think it works- its dark; and a bit confusing; the eye dances around but cannot fix its gaze;

Now, if you lit the pineapple on fire, the stem; that might do it.

Best of luck.

Necklace
by Sim

Comment:
A bit blurry, although I like the dreaminess.