P&S Day 4: Jess
by socalsteve

Comment:
It's not really the pose that's awkward, it's the crop. She looks kind of amputated in an odd way, lol. Really though, you are on the right tract and these are wonderful for the first time.

P&S Day 3: Jess
by socalsteve

Comment:
C&C? Ok, but you asked! First you need to smooth out the flyaway hairs, especially the ones at the top of the head. They appear to be very sharp and give an odd look. Second, your lighting seems to be really harsh on her right side giving the white of the eye and the cheek a blown appearance. Also, this creates a harsh shadow separation between her breast and her shirt that's not flattering.

Now the props, lol! She a very pretty woman and you caught a beautiful smile. The pose is very natural and relaxed. Overall, nice job!

Day 5 : Ocean floor scenery
by ShutterPug

Comment:
Fantastic colors, great job capturing the oddities that we don't normally see!

Savannah
by L1

Comment:
Good luck to them, and hopefully they can beat the odds and make it work.

D a y 1
by mia67

Comment:
Nice texture! I'd suggest cropping off the partial child and focusing on the sadness of that expression. Lovely toning!

Iron-Butterfly
by GregoryB

Comment:
...Dont you know that Ill always be true?

Awesome interpretation!

Blush
by Jutilda

Comment:
So pretty, soft, nostalgic! Old time romance!

5
by Retroesque

Comment:
Awesome! Love all the space and the sense of smallness!!

Old Man
by cogerox

Comment:
Extremely cool!! Reminds me of an illustration in a children's book!

8-may 08. 70's revival no.2
by roz

Comment:
Love the "wet" look to it! You are an awesome artist!