Sidelines
by kleski

Comment:
Nice composition and color. I love how you can see the action but the focus is on the boy. Nice work.

Audience
by varlyte79

Comment:
Now that is a lot of bystanders. I like the framing and stacking here but I may have just gone with two levels, either that or I would like to see more of the top level. It seems tilted a bit but that may just be from shooting at an angle. More of a straight on composition would of worked so much better but that may not of been possible. Overall a pretty nice image.

Examining Elastic
by Mwam

Comment:
Well I have started commenting on all the images so no need skipping this one. I see this as a intentional shoehorn. I do not see any action, either shown or implied and I see no bystander.

Removed
by tanguera

Comment:
I like the different geometrical patterns, the overhead perspective, the hard shadow and the B&W processing. I just like this image, if I were to suggest anything different it would be to straighten the stones on the left side of the photo so it makes a nice clear line to the subject.

ESPO
by FourPointX

Comment:
First off Stone Sour Rocks. Ok now to the image. Sadly I do not like this image much at all and I want to, I love live music and concert photos. The crop on this is very strange with a couple of heads and hands in the crowd, part of the drum set and the camera guy(whom I suspect you are trying to portray as the innocent bystander) I imagine the crop is to try and have the bystander in the shot but I would of liked the bystander to be the main part of the composition and not just someone you think need to be cropped out.

At the scene
by Cuttooth

Comment:
The flashing strobes from the emergency vehicle gives a neat effect but there just seems to be too much going on in the shot and the bystanders are such a small part of the image.

Observation of Generations
by ladigiworks

Comment:
I like the center composition here and the contrasting light on dark and short vs. tall and small (observers) vs. large(wheel) I think there is a lot to appreciate with this shot the more it is looked upon.

Someday, that'll be me
by Rmac

Comment:
Fun shot showing a bit of a story. I would prefer a straighter image and maybe even cropping down a bit to get rid of most of the sky.

Young boy with Serious Look Observing Another Child Having a Fit
by HollyMann

Comment:
I think with kids you really should shoot the photo from their height. Lowering the camera to eye level or lower would add so much. Also I would have either moved myself to shoot from a different angle or moved the boy so that the bush in the background isn't directly behind him and seemingly growing out of his shoulder.

Can't Wait
by dtremain

Comment:
I have a few issues with this shot. For one the bystander isn't really viewing any action, just looking at a statue. Also th crop is weird for me, part of the base is cut off and the image is tilted. Maybe if you cut off the staue at the knees and threw it oof with some nice foreground bokeh to throw attention to the bystander, I think that would of really helped.