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| 12/13/2003 11:44:19 PM |
The Shape of Bassby NazgulComment: The lighting shows the shape well and also casts nice shadows. The white border is very distracting so close to the one string. |
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| 12/13/2003 11:41:29 PM |
contrastby EmerauldeComment: The contrast with the circular objects really shows off the shape of the egg. But the lack of a shadow and the bright edge of the egg makes it seem flat, almost "cut out". Indeed, my first impression was of a cylinder with a strange shaped hole before my mind registered the subtle shading and texture of the egg. |
| 12/13/2003 11:31:24 PM |
Winters Tear Drops by scab-labComment: Great timing! The contour of the icicle leads the eye to the drops, which are beautifully shaped. Nice color too. |
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| 12/13/2003 11:10:36 PM |
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| 12/13/2003 11:06:30 PM |
Shape of Leaves to Comeby kayceeComment: The assortment of small leaves is nicely arranged to complement the large leaf. They don't detract from it, but keep it from being too stark. |
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| 12/13/2003 10:48:40 PM |
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| 12/13/2003 10:34:36 PM |
Just a Dropby TerryGeeComment: The shape of the negative space is as interesting as the shape of the subject. Very nice! |
| 12/13/2003 01:26:28 PM |
Fading Beautyby TerryGeeComment: Greetings from the Critique Club!
Soft focus combine with high key and low contrast to make this image convey a transcendent, tranquil beauty. The background color is perfect for this message. The composition is just right. The leaf is close enough to the bottom of the frame that it doesn't draw undue attention, but provides support and context for the flowers. The bud going to the right at the top nicely balances the left-facing flowers.
Overall, a wonderfully sublime image. I like it very much. My only suggestion is to ignore those who would prefer a more conventional photo, which may indeed be beautiful but would lack the ethereal, spiritual effect you have succeeded in capturing here. |
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| 12/13/2003 10:39:07 AM |
Soft Watersby jonpinkComment: Greetings from the Critique Club!
The first thing that I notice when viewing this image are the beautiful warm colors. They draw me right in and work, along with the soft focus and predominantly horizontal lines, to give the photo a very peaceful feeling. The exposure and focus are great, and the sharpness (actually the lack thereof) is well controlled. The composition is lacking; putting the horizon right in the middle of the frame makes the photo seem split in half. The subtle clouds are very nice, but I think the overall photo would be more effective if most of the sky was cropped out. This would raise the horizon and make the buildings a more integral part of the photo. I also think it would have been better in a horizontal format (not cropped--the reflections are an essential part of the composition--but more expansive, including more buildings to the right and/or left). |
| 12/07/2003 11:39:36 PM |
Fuel of the Dayby KINGComment: Greetings from the Critique Club!
Like several others, to me this looks more like dirt in a flower pot than coffee. The "rule of thirds" composition works well here, putting the center of interest at the coffee in the scoop. The shadows in that area are entirely black, with no details; this helps to frame the coffee in the scoop, making it stand out from the rest of the coffee, even though it looks much the same. The different textures of the focused and unfocused coffee adds interest. But not that much; in the end I agree with your own assessment: the photo lacks excitement. It needs some variety to create some impact; something as simple as a metal scoop would be beneficial. |
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