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| 10/20/2004 12:48:15 PM |
Zombieby moviemanComment: I saw your thread on "freaking hypocrits" post and i wanted to offer you my critique to maybe help you out a little.
Composition: it works well, but could be cropped a tiny bit tighter on the top and a little looser on the bottom
Color: way too blue. I would say you should warm this up a bit for a more natural look
Focus: the fingers are clear in some locations (i see one pretty clear finger nail) and a few buttons on the remote are clear, but not enough clarity in the image. The DOF is fine for the face and body, but the hand and remote should be in more focus I would prefer
Lighting: it's a tad bit dark. Esp in bottom left and behind the ear of the person.
Contrast: could use a tiny step up
Communication: TV is communication so you meet the goal
Intrigue: It's really not that interesting to me, personally. It gets the point across, but I don't particularly feel drawn to it when looking at 50 pictures around it. It doesn't catch me and draw me in.
I hope this helps you!
Best to you!!! |
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| 10/19/2004 05:57:40 PM |
24 Hour Oasisby mfairbanksComment: What a bright store! I think the color is okay here. The composition is not really to my liking. I'd prefer to see the store lower in the frame, not cropped so tightly on the left, and rotated a tiny bit counter clockwise. Also, the lighting is very bright inside, but not bright enough outside for this photo to grab me. I think a slower ISO and a higher fstop (maybe f11) would work better. Stars would be nice too! Good luck |
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| 10/19/2004 05:55:39 PM |
Friendly Night Shadeby ty_roniComment: The tree really doesn't 'add' to the photo in my opinion. the sky is beautiful, and perhaps a silhouette of a street lamp, or something more defined and unique to your area. the tree could be a little darker though, it's still got a feeling of 'color' to it when it should be stark black against a sky like this :) Good luck |
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| 10/19/2004 05:53:26 PM |
Parking for the Nightby yael27Comment: i like the colors, but i am not too keen on the composition. I think I would like ot see the tops of the boats more than the mucky water. The lighting is very nice. |
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| 10/19/2004 05:52:47 PM |
"The Parish on the Hillside"by TressiderComment: It is a bit blurry i am afraid. I would also like to see the clouds on the right disappear. THe lighitng is nice for the most part, but a little bright in the direct center, mid way up. good luck |
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| 10/18/2004 12:54:04 PM |
Sistersby myqylComment: Nice photo, but it's hard to tell that this photo was taken at NIGHT. I like the colors a lot. |
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| 10/18/2004 12:41:48 PM |
Paris after darkby GabrielComment: Excellent post card photo! The only thing I would recommend is to try to get this shot again without any clouds in the photo (see the right side) and to maybe get more sky so it's more of a 1/3 shot. Great job though!!! |
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| 10/18/2004 12:39:37 PM |
City Place, West Palm Beach, Floridaby cloudsmeComment: What did you do to the sky? That's insane! I love the yellow and blue contrast and the location of the kids playing. Fun photo. I am not sure what I would change actually. It's really high up there on my list. |
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| 10/18/2004 12:38:28 PM |
Around the Bendby sagestudioComment: Great colors! I like the feel too. I think the photo is still a tad dark, but it's a great photo, don't get me wrong. But perhaps burn the edges a tiny tiny bit prior to future use, maybe :) |
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| 10/18/2004 12:36:58 PM |
Watch out for the starsby andrimComment: Very unique photos! How'd you get the sign to light up so evenly without glare? Great job on that and the stars!!! |
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