Siobhan Cassells
by JamesA

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I've decided to comment on every shot in this challenge, since I'm sitting at 1 comments, and I'd rather try and take a positive approach to this rather than simply whining about my score:

I like the decision to focus more on what the model is wearing, other than the model itself. I'd considered a similar approach, but chickened out in the end. However, the focus, as I see it, seems to be a bit missed in this photo. Or, more specifically, the sharpness (it may not be a focus issue at all). There just doesn't seem to be enough detail in the texture, and the shot loses some of the ipact because of this.

Suit Man
by Shmee

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I've decided to comment on every shot in this challenge, since I'm sitting at 0 comments, and I'd rather try and take a positive approach to this rather than simply whining about my score:

A little Photo Noir, and slightly interesting. Fits the theme well, but also starts creeping away from fashion itself, and going to another level. Whether or not this is hurting you, I have no idea.

Fashionably Late
by dswann

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I've decided to comment on every shot in this challenge, since I'm sitting at 0 comments, and I'd rather try and take a positive approach to this rather than simply whining about my score:

A simple shot, but I feel it probably just lacks a little too much "oomph", if you will. The watch, partly hidden, doesn't have enough of a presence in the photograph, the tie is simply too much of a background element, and the suit is rendered secondary.

Flower Print
by tehben

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I've decided to comment on every shot in this challenge, since I'm sitting at 0 comments, and I'd rather try and take a positive approach to this rather than simply whining about my score:

A very simplistic, yet interesting shot. It has a timeless feel, and the more I look at it, the more I like it.

Definition of a Hipster
by megano

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I've decided to comment on every shot in this challenge, since I'm sitting at 0 comments, and I'd rather try and take a positive approach to this rather than simply whining about my score:

While I can see where you're trying to go with this photo, I would say this shot focuses less on FASHION, then it does on CULTURE. I agree that it's a bit semantical, but it's an important distinction in my book.

Haute Couture
by librodo

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I've decided to comment on every shot in this challenge, since I'm sitting at 0 comments, and I'd rather try and take a positive approach to this rather than simply whining about my score:

An exotic (for me), and nicely shot, photo. Definitely focuses on the fashion and style, and the model presents very well.

How to wear a white tie
by nico_blue

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I've decided to comment on every shot in this challenge, since I'm sitting at 0 comments, and I'd rather try and take a positive approach to this rather than simply whining about my score:

Wonderful studio shot with some great dynamic and energy. I'm sure your score reflects your time and effort in getting this image. For my part, I think it focuses a little too much on body-form than fashion, but I'm sure I'm a minority.

Sense of Style
by Bogi

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I've decided to comment on every shot in this challenge, since I'm sitting at 0 comments, and I'd rather try and take a positive approach to this rather than simply whining about my score:

A different take than most I've seen so far. I find it slightly busier around the model than I would like, as she seems to blend in a little too much. This isn't an automatically bad thing, depending on what you are aiming for, but when fashion should be the focus, and I'm left focusing more on the industrial setting, then there's been a little bit of a disconnect.

Procès de bal
by hojop25

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I've decided to comment on every shot in this challenge, since I'm sitting at 0 comments, and I'd rather try and take a positive approach to this rather than simply whining about my score:

More of a simple type portrait, than a fashion shot, IMO. There simply isn't enough focus on the presentation of what the model sports in wear, accessories, and/or style.

Miami Style
by Cory

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I've decided to comment on every shot in this challenge, since I'm sitting at 0 comments, and I'd rather try and take a positive approach to this rather than simply whining about my score:

A decent product shot, but lacking in anything that sets it apart.