Spilled
by artvet

Comment:
Overblown, causing a little too much softness in your "drops"

9/11
by Caltrop

Comment:
Did you actually add this noise in post? It doesn't look like actual sensor noise.

The Green Eyed Monster
by Beach_mel

Comment:
A pretty clever interpretation.

"LOVE"
by Hopefully

Comment:
pretty dark, overall.

double yellow and red
by dahkota

Comment:
So far, the only suggestion of color in the photos I've come across is in the title. Now, I might *know* that lines on a road are yellow, but red? What's supposed to be red? The model? Huh? A very weak 5 (and that only because it's not a horrible photo)

Extra Dry with a Twist of Lemon
by Jammur

Comment:
Because of the wash-out, you lose impact. Without the title, I'd have no idea what that object is without some intense scrutiny.

Portrait 07
by Ken

Comment:
I'm thinking a crop that includes a little less of the shoulder/torso?

I'd like to point you to your portrait "Those Eyes", to give you an idea of what can boost a portrait of this nature sometimes, and that's engagement with the photographer. Like Karmat says, she looks a little discontent here, or at the very least, distant. If you can find a way to engage your subject so that they can project at least a little personality, you are far better off. There are times when you certainly want that dreamy, far-off type look, but in this case it just looks like she's had enough and wants you to move on.

My Kids
by Kelli

Comment:
You might think about getting people to remove sunglasses (or at least flip them up onto their head) in shots like this. With her wearing them, and the boy without, it throws in a contrast that is a little unsettling. Also, I concur with the previous comments. Try to play around with curves on a layer mask.

The Dance
by Kelli

Comment:
A nice candid. In shots like this, it's always nice to try and frame them so you have more negative space in front of the model than in the back, as it's a natural composition for the way humanity is, and the way we see things. We like to follow where the eyes go, or where people face. It's not always possible, of course, but it's something I find that I've forced myself to try and do until it comes almost naturally. Not that there can't be exceptions, but in this case I really think it would make for a stronger shot compositionally.

Her Hand
by bvy

Comment:
Oooo.. I get to return your focus is soft comment ;)

Just kidding.

I like the angle