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Winner!
06/01/2003 10:53:17 AM
Winner!
by buck4free

Comment:
The picture of the kid and the guy to the right is great, but the person in the background with their back to us is distracting as is the movement blur on the person to the left. Some wonderful elements but it doesn't work overall for me. I also think it's a great pity that you didn't frame it a little lower to get the feet fully in shot.
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Control - Today's Matrix
05/28/2003 07:54:05 PM
Control - Today's Matrix
by ScottK

Comment:
You asked for more specific comments... Well, the image doesn't grab me. It's not very interesting to look at - the back of someone's head needs more of a twist than this. To be honest, I didn't know it was a tv screen, it could have been a monitor. It seems sort of static and I'm generally not engaged by it.

I can see clear links to the movie and so it fits the challenge criteria but it's a long way off being something I'd ever want to hang on my wall.

In terms of composition, I think if I were doing the shot I would want to see more of the head - it looks awkward cut off at the bottom that way. Also, the shot is very dark overall. While the characters on the screen contrast with that they're a little garish and not particularly interesting to look at directly. My gaze is directionless as it runs around this picture looking for the focal point.

I find it difficult to offer in depth critiques at this stage as I know my own submissions are nothing special and full of faults. As you asked directly I thought I'd make an exception here.
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Turns my House into Home Sweet Home
05/28/2003 12:45:27 PM
Turns my House into Home Sweet Home
by StevePax

Comment:
This looks like a submission for the sound challenge!
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Home at last
05/28/2003 10:27:28 AM
Home at last
by Coley

Comment:
A little dark and out of focus but otherwise a great picture. Well caught.
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Getting ready for my birthday party on the 31st
05/28/2003 10:19:16 AM
Getting ready for my birthday party on the 31st
by jjbeguin

Comment:
A bit too much featureless grass in the picture for my liking.
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Black & white H2O
05/26/2003 04:36:59 PM
Black & white H2O
by ladpupmoe

Comment:
Generally nice, but needs rotating a few degrees to the right and the bend of the straw below/above the water is a bit distracting.
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Silouette des ustensiles
05/26/2003 04:32:54 PM
Silouette des ustensiles
by orussell

Comment:
I like the idea of doing a silhouette for this challenge
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Midnight Church
05/26/2003 04:31:53 PM
Midnight Church
by tyrkinn

Comment:
Nice. Looks almost computer generated.
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Rose an artistic interpretation
05/26/2003 04:21:15 PM
Rose an artistic interpretation
by EJ

Comment:
Very grainy... if you were going for that look I'm unclear as to why and this image doesn't work for me.
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A Very Unusual Portrait
05/26/2003 04:20:19 PM
A Very Unusual Portrait
by smellyfish1002

Comment:
Great detail but I find the overall effect disturbing
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