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| 06/01/2003 10:53:17 AM |
Winner!by buck4freeComment: The picture of the kid and the guy to the right is great, but the person in the background with their back to us is distracting as is the movement blur on the person to the left. Some wonderful elements but it doesn't work overall for me. I also think it's a great pity that you didn't frame it a little lower to get the feet fully in shot. |
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| 05/28/2003 07:54:05 PM |
Control - Today's Matrixby ScottKComment: You asked for more specific comments... Well, the image doesn't grab me. It's not very interesting to look at - the back of someone's head needs more of a twist than this. To be honest, I didn't know it was a tv screen, it could have been a monitor. It seems sort of static and I'm generally not engaged by it.
I can see clear links to the movie and so it fits the challenge criteria but it's a long way off being something I'd ever want to hang on my wall.
In terms of composition, I think if I were doing the shot I would want to see more of the head - it looks awkward cut off at the bottom that way. Also, the shot is very dark overall. While the characters on the screen contrast with that they're a little garish and not particularly interesting to look at directly. My gaze is directionless as it runs around this picture looking for the focal point.
I find it difficult to offer in depth critiques at this stage as I know my own submissions are nothing special and full of faults. As you asked directly I thought I'd make an exception here. |
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| 05/28/2003 12:45:27 PM |
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| 05/28/2003 10:27:28 AM |
Home at lastby ColeyComment: A little dark and out of focus but otherwise a great picture. Well caught. |
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| 05/28/2003 10:19:16 AM |
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| 05/26/2003 04:36:59 PM |
Black & white H2Oby ladpupmoeComment: Generally nice, but needs rotating a few degrees to the right and the bend of the straw below/above the water is a bit distracting. |
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| 05/26/2003 04:32:54 PM |
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| 05/26/2003 04:31:53 PM |
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| 05/26/2003 04:21:15 PM |
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