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Choose Carefully
04/23/2008 07:29:12 PM
Choose Carefully
by togtog

Comment:
I find the texture/pattern of the background a little distracting. I'm also not sure how this fits into "even."
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Pythagorian Theorem
03/12/2008 09:09:31 PM
Pythagorian Theorem
by dsmil

Comment:
Given that the challenge was "blurry mess," with descriptors of "chaotic," "disorganized," and yet "engaging" and "interesting," I'm puzzled at what this image is trying to accomplish. The background at the right of the image is more "cluttered" than chaotic, while the subject is just blurry enough to be annoying and not blurry enough to truly meet the challenge.

I don't think this image would be particularly strong or compelling if everything were in sharp focus; the limited amount of blurring fails to improve matters any.

How could this be made better? I'm not sure this image can be modified to fit this challenge in particular, but it wouldn't hurt to simplify the composition to just the model and the blackboard. A tighter crop could help, as would adjusting the lighting to be a little softer and more appealing. If your model were to be working with a set of French curves (used in technical drawing), you might have some possibilities for the model to echo shape and line of what was on the blackboard.
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After Burner
03/12/2008 08:54:41 PM
After Burner
by MelonMusketeer

Comment:
My pick for the blue ribbon. Nice job.
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Far Above The City Street
03/11/2008 10:45:41 PM
Far Above The City Street
by jonfrommk

Comment:
I think the picture would be stronger with the TV mast cropped out leaving only the chimneys.
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How to construct a flat roof
03/11/2008 10:25:38 PM
How to construct a flat roof
by Dave Gordon

Comment:
The focus looks a little off. I do like the idea/composition, however.
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This is Art
03/11/2008 10:01:12 PM
This is Art
by willhadl

Comment:
Lots of interesting texture here.
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Cat Bath
03/04/2008 10:33:43 PM
Cat Bath
by Iraklis

Comment:
I think you needed to "persuade" the cat to move slightly to the left ... ;-)
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Lamp Stands
03/04/2008 10:31:33 PM
Lamp Stands
by DistantColours

Comment:
Nice, clean, simple image. I might trim a little from the bottom, though.
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black and white on white and black
03/04/2008 10:12:56 PM
black and white on white and black
by tpbremer

Comment:
The focus/sharpness seems a little soft, particularly on the top white pencil.
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"There is no gray."
03/04/2008 09:56:03 PM
"There is no gray."
by johst582

Comment:
I quite like the concept behind this image.
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