Leggyby
rameviComment: Greetings from the Critique Club ;)
Ramon, I think your idea is very nice, the legs are soft and the skin is smooth;) Quite a sexy scene.
However their are a few things with the photograph that I think could be improved upon.
The first thing is the focusing - I imagine your intended focal point is the shoes / feet considering this is a feet challenge, yet they are very soft which is a real shame.
There is a lot of detail in the shoes which really needs to be pin sharp to show it's full detail.
The second thing is the background. Now I may be wrong here, but most people go for a pure black background - if that was your intention then you needed to under expose a stop or two as i can see the ripples and creases.
Finlay, the overall exposure is a little under exposed on the legs, a quick fix in photoshop would be to adjust the levels which would sort it out. To get it right in camera I would have shined less light on the background, and a little more on the models legs.
Overall I find 5.7 a fair score and a worthy effort.
JP