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by bennettjamie

Comment:
smile would help the over all mood of the shoot

157_with border.jpg
by bennettjamie

Comment:
you model has a great smile and this shows it off again. I like. the pose is ok but seems slightly uncomfortable.

159_with border.jpg
by bennettjamie

Comment:
Like the pose, chin needs to be up a bit... her expression reads sad to me here, is that what you were going for?

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by bennettjamie

Comment:
your modle has a wonderful smile! and this shot shows it off very well I like it... my only nit pick is to have the hands out of the pocket... on the knees would work.

otherwise great shot

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by bennettjamie

Comment:
Couple of things on this one... 1) I think the B&W could have been just a tad brighter to brighten feel of the photo. 2)I'm not sure if you were going for sad, but that's sort of how this shot feels, a smile maybe or even lifting the head to a new angle would give a happier feel (if you were going for sad then you hit it right on) 3) some dodging around the eye's to bring them out.

technically the photo is good. good job :)

Shattered
by lovethelight

Comment:
I definately like the consept of the shot... the one thing I'm not sure works is her face... I think the dark around her eye's is a bit much and I'm not sure about the expression... is it angry? phycotic? demonic? I'm not sure.. lastly her nipple sticking out there is distracting from the flow of the photo. my eye's want to folow from face to the floor but keeps getting drawn back to that distracting nipple.

Other than that the style is good and works for me and the lighting is just right. you've also captured the moment very well.

good job!

Together Forever
by WendyWoo

Comment:
I love this shot... you could sell it and make lots I'm sure... it may just be my monitor (at work) but the whites on the swan and on the hair of the people seem a little bright... like I said though could just be me monitor

Marti Pellow Up Close
by WendyWoo

Comment:
Ditto the last comment... great stuff!

Quasi un pagliaccio
by inshaala

Comment:
great lighing and shot!

Ridi pagliaccio
by Rino63

Comment:
very imotive... I like