Day one - Coal Country
by xXxscarletxXx

Comment:
I like it just the way it is. Good job!

Forgotten Boundary
by Ubersteiny

Comment:
What I like:
The way your subject(s) stand out from the dark background. It gives the whole image a very moody feel to it.
The exposure is great, especially for your first light painting attempt.

What I would work on:
There are too many conflicting subjects in the photo. I see the fence as one, the tree as another, and the distant sky as a third. None of them seem to relate to one another nor enhance one another.
While visually pleasing, I don't get a sense of a story from the image. I'm wondering what you saw in this image that made you take it? If there wasn't a 'fence' theme, would you have taken this image anyway? Your title seems to allude to a story, but I don't see how this fence is 'forgotten'.

Overall, good job.

Offspring
by CalliopeKel

Comment:
Beautiful play of light and shadows!

Early Morning Surfer
by cp5140

Comment:
This looks like a great image but it's hard to tell because it's so small (I know you did max out your width). I would love to see this printed at full size to really appreciate it. I hope it doesn't get too punished for being too hard to see details.

Oregon Dunes
by BaldurT

Comment:
My eyes keep drifting off the top of the frame... I don't know if it was possible but I would rather have seen this photo taken from a bit lower angle to let the eye follow the lines of the sand more. But I do think the lighting on the grasses is awesome! Good job.

Too Little Too Late
by njsabs

Comment:
Great idea but too dark for me. Let me see more detail, especially in the light spot on the floor.

What's on my left?
by CyMaN

Comment:
Great idea! Love the lighting. I just wish the model didn't look so washed out.

Nooooooooooooooooooooooooo!(IT)
by indridistefans

Comment:
I absolutely love the shot! I have a friend who does EXACTLY that and I can hear his voice as I read the title... lol. Thanks for the good laugh and reminder of friends I've not seen in a while.

Challenging Life of a Clown
by shaggy35

Comment:
I want to see more of the eyes.

Peace
by palmero

Comment:
I would try cropping so the emphasis is more on the mans face and hand. I find there is too many other things in the photo.