I'm Melting
by paynekj

Comment:
Cute wizard of oz reference in the title, I like the spotlight lighting effect, and the whole idea is kinda neat too. There is a little noise in the image and the top part of the chocolate is a little out of focus. Having the light a little more forward so the writing part isnt as dark and trying to get an even lighting over the chocolate may have been good too.

swirls of chocolate
by MightyMouse

Comment:
Good idea and it must have taken you ages to set up! Unfortunately the technical side isnt quite there as there is significant noise and the quality isnt that great. The uncovered area on the top right is a little distracting too. But I love the idea!

when worlds collide
by BrennanOB

Comment:
Interesting idea, although it's funny that Cadbury is actually distributed by Hersey in the US. Also a powerman 5000 song so that's always a plus! Anyways.... You did a good job of getting the white background, the depth of field is good as everything seems to be in focus, the composition is chaotic but goes with the concept you were trying to convey. Not a bad shot.

Before and After
by maharris

Comment:
I like the vibrant red of the strawberry and the green looks sharp, fresh, and vibrant too. Personally would have preferred a little more white space on the sides of the shot to balance it up a little, and the water droplets on the plate are a little distracting.

The Chocolate Platter
by Node

Comment:
I actually like this despite seeing a few technical issues that arent the best. The main issue is the backdrop used, you can see the crumples and texture in the cloth, although part of me wonders if that was intentional. I like the green, it adds a nice dash of color to the composition. Everything seems in focus, the lighting looks natural, which gives it a kind of fresh feel. It's appealing.

Chocolate
by Elpis

Comment:
I like the stream of liquid chocolate and the lighting that catches both sides of it. I also like the composition of it too. I'm not so fond of the chocolate bar at the bottom although it is well lit, but I cant explain why. Even so, it's a good image.

The sweetest thing.
by p_johns

Comment:
The squirls are very artistic, the composition isnt bad, the lighting is ok although some of the light reflection spots are a little distracting. The idea is a good one.

Have a Break
by soheil

Comment:
Not sure of the significance of the mixed background but it doesnt really look out of place, just different. The lighting isnt bad, the composition is fine, the focus is ok but the left hand side looks like it's fading into OOF, which isnt necessarily a bad thing but with shots like this you normally expect the entire shot to be in full focus or the depth of field more noticably shallow.

Gold and Chocolate
by faithriko

Comment:
I like the golden color of the grater and they do compliment the browns of the chocolate shavings, but to me the shavings are a little too clumped and out of focus and dont really look that appealing. Maybe one or two distinct long curls would have worked better.

Chocotini
by animes2k

Comment:
I like the gradient background and the reflection of it in just the one side of the shaker. The glass is interesting and having the white kiss with the stripes almost counter the stripes on the glass is appealing. I'm not sure about the chocolate on the bottom although I could probably take it or leave it - I'm not sure how much they add, although I do like their reflection in the shaker. Focus and composition is good. Overall it's a good shot.