Dead At 27
by Steveo77z

Comment:
Good idea... BUT . I'm not real fond of the composition or the sheet for that matter. 6

So much for the crowd pictures...
by Nobody

Comment:
Voting on DPC? LOL I like this one. 9

Impact?
by nico_blue

Comment:
Wait for it...! LOL 8

First Day
by manic35

Comment:
Good lighting good composition. Fun colors! Good Job!

Eye for Colours
by librodo

Comment:
One of my faves in the challenge and well deserved ribbon. Congrats!

1.21 Gigawatts
by MQuinn

Comment:
Listen, I'm not mad or anything, so here's my take on it.

I voted it a 5. Technically the exposure was good, but the focus seemed to be a bit soft. As far as composition goes, I found it too centered, especially since the bushes to the left throw off the centered look.

But, aside from my vote, I believe that voters got over-exposed to shots of industrial plants. In both our case, it seems the box is either too full or too empty.

curves of early morning light
by stumpy

Comment:
I like the idea of the shot, but it has a few problems. Tilted horizon is a big problem for me, that could be easily fixed in a graphics program. Composition could be stronger, perhaps moving the model to the other side of the bed and not having hte matress showing on the opposite side of her could have strengthened it.

Your background failed to go completely black on the black portions. That would have helped the shot some.

I'm going to give you an 8 though. Nudes in non-nude challenges don't tend to do really well around here, so I wish you the best of luck.

Pointe Shoes
by angela_packard

Comment:
Angela, YOU ROCK!!! Congrats on the Ribbon. I knew you could do it!

Contrast
by angela_packard

Comment:
Hey Angela, can't vote this time... but this is a good composition... wish ya luck .

Collecting books
by casm

Comment:
Good idea, but execution could be tuned.

Things to work on: The Window lighting is distracting. Change angle so that the window light comes from your back or from off to a side.

This would also eliminate the shadows from the flash, whcih make this a snapshot quality photo.

Try to use the rule of thirds in your photos. The subject, in this case the girl would have been stronger if she had been moved to the very left of the composition with books filling the rest of the frame.