Dapper Duoby
yakatmeComment: ::: Greetings from Critique Club :::
Hi, as requested, here is an indepth critique of your submission.
First Impression - the most important one:
Wow, luck of the draw I get to discuss this photo with you again. It's quite a good shot and does meet the challenge well.
Composition:
I like how you framed your subject here, but the "frame" itself is a bit cluttered to be as effective as it could be.
Subject:
Subject is clear, but once again I'm distracted by all the clutter. By that, I mean I can tell too much of what is going on with everyone else. As mentioned in the forumns the pont of view is from inside the mob. A more omnipetent point of view may have broguht "singled" him out more.
Technical (Colour, focus, and light):
Colour: quite nice... but for some reason, my eye is seeing his color as being different than the rest of the image. He seems more saturated than everything else. I'm not sure why.
Focus: Very sharp in his eyes, but fades a little too fast from there.
Light: Well lit, and very well exposed.
To grow its vote?:
Point of view, I believe or simplification of the frame. Your outtake that you showed us, I feel with its simplicity and interest would have score quite a bit better.
Summary:
It is a good photo, very good technicals. Just a few compostional adjustments could have made this really something really special.
Hope to see more from you soon,
Leroy