The Real Matrixby
gocComment: ::: Greetings from Critique Club :::
Hi, as requested, here is an indepth critique of your submission.
Oh and I have good news. Your photo is the last entry in the CC queue. It's the first time we've emptied the queue. So you get something special with this photo.
First Impression - the most important one:
This shot does take a lot of look of The Matrix movies and I think it's pretty neat looking. Definitely a creative take on window blinds :-)
Composition:
Interesting. I like how you have made the corridor lead to the end of the hall. Definitely draws the eyes down the corridor.
Subject:
Not really applicable to this shot.
Technical (Color, focus, and light):
Color: Definitely works for what you were trying to do.
Focus: Seems sharp and DOF is deep enough to work for you.
Light: I like how it falls off as it comes toward the camera. Very nice effect.
To grow its vote?:
I'm not sure that it worked for the voters. It's less of an "architecture" shot than most would expect.
Summary:
Creative entry and shows competence on your part. Keep up the nice work.
Hope to see more from you soon,
Leroy
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