Beer!!
by asmithphotos

Comment:
Nice shot and good detail.

In need of a Model...
by RMyers1314

Comment:
I guess I could have warned ya that PB and undies don't particularly score well ;-) At any rate, I thought it was hilarious!

Next time try cheese instead :-D

Gaze
by stare_at_the_sun

Comment:
Wow, wow, wow :-)

beatles outtake
by Jaded_Housewife

Comment:
I AM IMPRESSED that that is a cutout!

Dual
by darnok

Comment:
The image appears a bit flat. May I suggest a curves adjustment for midtone contrast. Try doing a forum search for s-curve.

a breath of fresh air.
by andrewreiner

Comment:
Cute. I have issues with the seams in the paper. I've found that for shots like these the glossy side of a white sheet of poster paper works great. Just thought I'd let ya in on that tip. Cheap, yet effective :-)

"You're the one I love, I think about you all the time"
by angela_packard

Comment:
::: Greetings from Critique Club :::

Hi, as requested, here is an indepth critique of your submission.

First Impression - the most important one:
Hey look, I finally get to critique one for my pal :-) My first impression was that it is very touching and nicely colored and composed.

Composition:
I like the square crop. If I were to change it any, I'd move the grave down to almost touching the bottom of the photo.

Subject:
I think it stands out well from the background. Maybe a little less deep DoF would have helped some but not too much, I think a lot of bokah in the background would have been really distracting.

Technical (Color, focus, and light):
All good. I don't think I'd change anything technically on this photo.

To grow its vote?:
Voters suck, we know that ;-) It's a good shot and IMO a bit under-rated. It has emotion and thought in it.

Summary:
I like it. Ofcourse you knew that. But, keep up the good work.

Hope to see more from you soon,
Leroy

Single Light Source
by amandalore

Comment:
Ya know, if I had a body like this my cheese pic wouldn't have gotten a 4.1 score :-P LOL

Unfettered
by WickedB

Comment:
::: Greetings from Critique Club :::

Hi, as requested, here is an indepth critique of your submission.

First Impression - the most important one:
Nice shot, nicely lit and attractive subject. Congrats on your personal best score.

Composition:
The composition is pretty good, but the lighting hurts the overall comp some. I believe a tighter (perhaps square) crop to exclued the lower body would have produced a more appealing image. Not that this one is bad by any means.

Subject:
Nothing to distract me from the subject. That's always a plus :-)

Technical (Color, focus, and light):
Color: I'm thinking I would desaturate the photo just a bit as it's looking just a bit too red to me.
Focus: looks good and sufficient DoF to keep the entire subject in focus.
Light: I like the overall lighting. Very nice. I'm not liking the lighting fall off on the legs. I think I would have cropped the image just above the pubic mound to deal with this issue.

To grow its vote?:
The few issues I called out would have grown the vote quite a bit. Technically, it's a great photo and I kinda think it's a bit under-rated. But, them's the breaks.

Summary:
Really nice work. Keep it up.

Hope to see more from you soon,
Leroy

emmm.....YUMMY~
by eggfox

Comment:
::: Greetings from Critique Club :::

Hi, as requested, here is an indepth critique of your submission.

First Impression - the most important one:
I generally like zoom blur, but it isn't working for me here.

Composition:
Not the strongest. I think the lenscap being dead center of the photo really hurts the comp a lot.

Subject:
It ends up pretty much being the lenscap, when I thik you wanted the lens itself to be the subject.

Technical (Color, focus, and light):
Color is fine.
Focus is a tad soft, which happens in these types of shots.
Light: It's a bit harsh and blowing highlights everywhere. It's a nice artistic effect, but doesn't work here.

To grow its vote?:
Well, other than the issues above, camera related photos just don't score well at DPC.

Hope to see more from you soon,
Leroy