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Challenge: Single Light Source II (Advanced Editing IV*)
Camera: Nikon D70
Lens: Nikon AF-S DX Zoom-Nikkor 18-70mm f/3.5-4.5G IF-ED
Location: Boston, MA
Date: May 30, 2006
Aperture: f3.5
ISO: 200
Shutter: 1/640
Galleries: Nude
Date Uploaded: May 30, 2006

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Statistics
Place: 11 out of 238
Avg (all users): 6.7276
Avg (commenters): 7.9444
Avg (participants): 6.8214
Avg (non-participants): 6.6848
Views since voting: 3854
Views during voting: 431
Votes: 268
Comments: 26
Favorites: 4 (view)

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AuthorThread
 01/10/2007 11:52:43 PM
This is fantastic, as shown by your score. :)
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 06/13/2006 01:21:58 PM
Thanks for all the great comments. This was nearly impossible- it's a self-portrait, so a special thanks to everyone who liked the model.

06/10/2006 12:35:43 AM
::: Greetings from Critique Club :::

Hi, as requested, here is an indepth critique of your submission.

First Impression - the most important one:
Nice shot, nicely lit and attractive subject. Congrats on your personal best score.

Composition:
The composition is pretty good, but the lighting hurts the overall comp some. I believe a tighter (perhaps square) crop to exclued the lower body would have produced a more appealing image. Not that this one is bad by any means.

Subject:
Nothing to distract me from the subject. That's always a plus :-)

Technical (Color, focus, and light):
Color: I'm thinking I would desaturate the photo just a bit as it's looking just a bit too red to me.
Focus: looks good and sufficient DoF to keep the entire subject in focus.
Light: I like the overall lighting. Very nice. I'm not liking the lighting fall off on the legs. I think I would have cropped the image just above the pubic mound to deal with this issue.

To grow its vote?:
The few issues I called out would have grown the vote quite a bit. Technically, it's a great photo and I kinda think it's a bit under-rated. But, them's the breaks.

Summary:
Really nice work. Keep it up.

Hope to see more from you soon,
Leroy
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 06/07/2006 01:00:32 AM
bottom third loses the power of the rest but powerful enough foto
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
06/06/2006 11:02:18 PM
Nice use of light & shadow.
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 06/06/2006 06:08:15 PM
Wow!
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 06/06/2006 04:44:54 AM
strong curves there!very beautiful skin tone!
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 06/06/2006 01:24:52 AM
Great lighting. I like how the back and legs fade to darkness.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 06/06/2006 01:05:12 AM
Erotic.
And very well done.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 06/05/2006 08:43:33 PM
Great lines, curves and lighting. The unusual pose adds an element of intrigue.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 06/05/2006 07:29:33 PM
superbe... love it...
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 06/05/2006 03:06:19 PM
I like the almost abstract look the light creats in this image.
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 06/05/2006 10:15:02 AM
Great shot! I think by having the model pose that way, you get a different sense of the human form. The lighting and the curve work together nicely.
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 06/05/2006 04:31:33 AM
feels good
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 06/03/2006 04:05:50 PM
The lighting and body curve work well...8
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 06/02/2006 09:24:31 PM
windblown flame, nice.
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 06/02/2006 09:58:16 AM
Good work
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 06/01/2006 10:00:53 PM
damn you're hot, awesome shot, and please don't move to new york
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 06/01/2006 05:42:42 PM
Awesome shot! Way to capture that pose, great dramatic lighting.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 06/01/2006 03:35:02 AM
Strong composition. Nice sharp focus. Excellent use of lighting to demonstrate the curves and lines of the model.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 06/01/2006 12:01:21 AM
This is beautiful.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 05/31/2006 03:43:01 PM
very nice,
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 05/31/2006 02:03:07 PM
Beauty!
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 05/31/2006 01:50:52 PM
This picture is great!
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 05/31/2006 11:25:59 AM
Good use of light and shadow.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 05/31/2006 04:12:58 AM
A little too dark, and soft, for my taste but still a beautifully done photo. Hope this does well for you in challenge. I like the warm tones also.8.
  Photographer found comment helpful.


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