Do you want to dance with me?
by zaflabout

Comment:
OK job on the selective color, but there are some major flaws. For instance, the nearest girl (who is a stunning beauty, btw) has a glow of fleshtone around her ruby lips that makes her look a bit wierd and there are artifacts on the legs of all of the lovely ladies. I'm not too sure about the composition, though I can't say what I would have done to make it better. The background is too busy and the selective color is just a bit too over the top, even for advanced editing. I also could do without having the scrawny, baggy panted rear of the Harry Connick, Jr. wanna-be in front so prominent in the frame! LOL!

XI
by bragur

Comment:
It is unclear what this is and why it should be interesting.

Cascade Reflections
by madhatter

Comment:
If the sky weren't blown out it would be better. Also, I don't like the composition. The mountain being further left in the frame, at the expense of the uninteresting left end of the lake, and a crop just below the tree reflections would improve the shot.

Sexy Stare
by behindthescenes

Comment:
This would be better cropped portrait or with the subject offset more. Also, the visible metal supports in the background are a distraction. You need a less transparent backdrop or dispense with the backdrop and have the background look industrial. As for the model, the stare is reasonably sexy, but the eye make-up is over done and dark patch on the cheek makes her look somewhat sickly or malevolent. Also, the flyaways in the hair look unkempt instead of sexily rumpled, as I expect was the intent. As for the lack of shirt front, it doesn't hurt the shot, but it isn't really adding that much to it either. A style of shirt and pose that gave some hint of curves instead of simply showing cleavage would be more enticing.

Maria
by steinar

Comment:
A bit too centered. It would be more effective if she were over to the right (her left) about one head width. Also, the bush on the left woudl be better in focus or out of the shot. The background being out of focus is good, but that bush is too close to the subject and distracts. The lighting is also a bit harsh, with too dark of shadows on her face. A slightly different angle or later in the day might have helped, or a reflector or or something to spread a kinder light on your pretty subject.

Sugar in my coffe
by tryggunnz

Comment:
Nice stop action! It would be nice if you could still see the sugar cube (which is, I assume, what made the splash). Also, a slightly longer focus and tighter crop, eliminating the negative space at the top, would improve the image. As it is, the large white space leaves one wondering why the whole cup is not in the frame and the splash is not all in focus?

on the line.....
by AzCKelly

Comment:
I wish the beak and tail were as sharp as the eye and feet.

It's Cold Outside
by Transit

Comment:
Well composed, good focus, interesting lady! The colors are a bit ruddy, but that is not a major knock.

NOPE! No kiss. No jump!
by drydoc

Comment:
Compositionally uninspirring. The focus could be a bit longer, as the frog is just on the edge of being in focus. I would crop it closer to the frog, since the out-of-focus orange stuff draws the eyes away from the story here.

Her Teddy
by rossbilly

Comment:
Cute kid. The dark spots on the pillow/blanket in front of her face are a distraction, as is the out-of-focus hair. Compositionally, I would have put her lower in the frame.