Mango:Kenya
by hotpasta

Comment:
great portrait, little color on his thumb and finger but otherwise perfect

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Jack

visions
by Car54

Comment:
excellent

8

Jack

Truth and Consequence
by grigrigirl

Comment:
interesting composition, I don't really like the processing - colours too saturated

6

Jack

Cathedral of St Paul
by genghis

Comment:
very nicely done

8

Jack

Quick run! Don't look behind you...
by Hawkeye

Comment:
would have been more effective to have her sitting closer to the cliffs so you don't cross the strong diagonals coming from the L. even sitting on the stone would have been better. The colour of her sweater is a problem too.

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Late Spring in the Arctic
by indridistefans

Comment:
still looks pretty dark and dreary, needs some light in the fore or mid ground

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Portrait Of A Lady
by Makka

Comment:
very nice, great lighting, processed effectively

8

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Lotus - [Or Dude jumpin in woman´s swimsuit]
by russi

Comment:
great shot, I'm not sure about your ideas here but its effective in making me stop and think - my only criticism is the title. Let the photograph tell the story.

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Untitled
by Gnarf

Comment:
I like this photography and this type of photography in general, so I hope this does well. From a techinical standpoint only a few problems - the most telling is the distortion on the building and the lack of vertical lines on the R, the window seems vertical to the pipe but not to R side of the picture. Also a bit contrasty on his face, plus the white box behind the man is a problem. From a compostional standpoint you really have 4 separate ideas, each pulling the viewer and each pulling the viewer out of the picture - the man facing and walking out, the window half finished, the large non-finished rectangle in the lower R, and the lamp in the upper L. In order for the picutre to really work they either need to tell a story or they need to be equally powerful to keep the viewer coming back to the others. I don't quite get your story here, and I'm not sure about the power of each idea, but I really like your effort.

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floaters
by k4ffy

Comment:
this is really just too contrasty for me to find a place for my eye to stay with. the cars on the lower part of the picture don't work either

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