Dawn of Industry
by The_Dentist

Comment:
This is an interesting use of the road and works well with the industrial feel.. but I do think you've wasted potential use of details in the buildings and they almost seem like negative spaces which I don't like..

Columns of steam
by Brin

Comment:
Really brave choice of lighting, using it to create silhouette-ish subject .. I love the sky this creates with the smoke but I can almost see interesting details around of the base of the building and it makes me want to see more..

Dancers Likes, Environment Minds !!!!!!!!
by ankit_mohabansi

Comment:
I really wish you'd kept the dancers out of the image because the light itself would have been more interesting and the dancers seem to red and underexposed and don't add more to the composition..

doing something
by kolasi

Comment:
Very cool find and interesting colours, composition.. The only thing that lets it down is the lighting. The whole image seems to be overexposed and too bright losing quite a bit of the details..

Night Fumes
by Hauxon

Comment:
Interesting image.. Really like the glow of the sky and the streamlined smoke trail. but maybe it would have been more interesting composition if you had been closer and the image had been using the longness of the building.

Heavy Metal Fishing
by vlado

Comment:
Nice soft colours and lighting but I think the framing should have been with the fisher man more to the right [and more light. He's just not very obvious in that darkened corner] and I find the connection between pollution and just the one man slightly vague.. maybe it's rigs [behind the man] that you're alluding to. I'm not sure..

Polluting the night sky
by oskar

Comment:
I really like the colours and span of the image but maybe there isn't enough of a focal point

Pollution of the Body
by timwest167

Comment:
I like the composition but maybe cropping it the slightest bit more[like keeping a quarter of the ashtray and more negative space in the image]the use of b/w is an interestind idea.. Maybe the light should have been gentler so the cigarette wasn't so blown out by it..

Coca-Cola Classic
by Lydia

Comment:
Nice image. like how the red pops out and the reflections..

Pox
by xianart

Comment:
Ouches!! The temptation to sratch must be horrid..

Message edited by author 2008-02-22 11:41:07.