With This Ring.....
by twm122

Comment:
Simple and reasonably effective. Doesn't have any great WOW factor - needs to be lit better to give it some punch.

The New Day
by MAK

Comment:
Very busy and no real focal point for my eyes to come to rest on. A clutterd midground.

Military Superflower
by GeneralE

Comment:
Yes, like the idea, but the vapour trails are not the place where the eye comes to rest - they are incidental. All the leading lines drag the eye off down the pier.

Also check the horizon - falls off to the right.

Celebration: Circle of Life
by gsal

Comment:
Oooh now something different at last. yes I like this, it works for me. Maybe push the circle just a little further right and lose that heavy dark band. Good work

Safe!
by AP

Comment:
Not sure if you intended this or whether it was a happy accident. Would be better without that middle arm so the viewer could actually see the action. The other arms are fine.

Birthday boy
by DogAngel

Comment:
Nicely constructed. I get the feeling that the focus falls off just a little on the kid on the left, but thats a minor point. One of the better images in this challenge

Celebrate Indoor Plumbing
by mandyturner

Comment:
Difficult to allocate points to this. There's nothing to really slap the viewer in the face, it relies on the novelty of being a toilet I guess. Trouble is DPC has a wealth of other tiolet images for some strange reason and therefore the novelty falls a bit flat.

I'd flush this one and sit down somewhere private and think up a different theme .... I know the ideal place ;-)

Fall Finally Arrived!
by Elaine

Comment:
I think you already know that the front wallnut is out of focus, and that this type of image needs to be pin sharp all the way through. Shame because its nicely constructed.

Clambake!
by Bear_Music

Comment:
Nice colourful image. Some strange distortions in the upper part, but I can live with that.

Celebrate The Coming Of Autumn !
by Coley

Comment:
Nice try. Would have preferred to see the faces and to have all the hair in frame.