Day 3: Ennui
by Wildcard

Comment:
Well for grunge you need a different pose! Both this and the other would be grunge shots are very soft delicate poses. Just a start I think.

Trapped
by DianeS

Comment:
OOHYYY MY! Love this. I was just saying... I want to see something inspiring and BOOM!

Really great job! Would like to know more about the PP.

day three - reach
by nixter

Comment:
Beautiful shot! You have a good body to work with!

It would be cool to see one similar to this but with more shadow variation on your back to see all the little muscles there and real clear, no grain.

Great job.

hide and seek
by ordinaryangel

Comment:
Dark is fine but if that's the way you want to go start trying to have that feel but still maintain a crisp image.

Big problem I have with this one is you can't really see you and all the pixilated splotches.

Day 2 - Is It Really Only Two?.jpg
by lemeryj

Comment:
Yay expression! Love it.

We've all just gotta keep chugging along together! I keep hoping somehow the ideas will just pour in and I will have too many on my plate.

Ah, to dream.

X
by DianeS

Comment:
Nicely done. Just curious... do you have a studio?

délicatement
by TOY

Comment:
Gorgeous. Has a very simple and delacate feel. Oh ha! I just looked at the title after I wrote that. Fitting.

Looks like something you would see in a lingerie store. I always try to leave a critique but it is hard because I really like this! So I'd say this might have done nicely with a bit of eye contact, even in just a shy way. Another thing is perhaps a more varied background, if it wasn't for the arm being so close the edge I'd say possibly a very subtle vignette.

Faultless
by jaxed

Comment:
Beautfiful! The model is lovely as well as the lighting. Very crisp clean shot. My only problems is I think the bricks really take away from the shot. Certainly could have done with a much simpler background.

Portrait of a Victorian Angel
by Jaded_Housewife

Comment:
Very cute. I think this really could have done without the frame. She's got the little outfit and the makeup and is just adorable. The frame has been done a lot, which is firn but I really don't feel in enhances this photograph.

No time for Portraits
by sfmorris

Comment:
Nice lighting and editing but all around an uninteresting shot. Perhaps if he had looked up at the camer with some sort of expression like excitement, boredom, annoyance at the photographers presence... then it would have impact to me.