Chemistry
by jodiecoston

Comment:
Nice composition with good use of DOF.

"Modern education"
by squeeky jee

Comment:
The lighting needs to be improved. Also the focus point is where??

The Village School
by Riponlady

Comment:
Needs something that identifies it as a school and not jujst some random building. Seems oversharpened.

Dunce
by ShutterPug

Comment:
Very cute. Well done.

Beginning Steps to Higher Learning
by lauraodom

Comment:
Sorry but whenever I see a photo like this my first thought is "it is going to tumble over."

Ready
by sigrun_th

Comment:
Very nice composition. Could use a little less exposure on the pencil.

Homework or Recesswork
by evylyn

Comment:
Too centered and could be cropped tighter, but otherwise fine.

Beyond...the Journey begins
by Giorgio

Comment:
The main problem for me is the perspective and tilt. This appears to be done with a wide angle setting which will distort perspective unless the horizon is vertically centered. If you can't center the horizon then shoot from farther away with a longer focal length. Also, tilt is very apparent when there is an obviously straight object in the picture.

Note that while perspective can be corrected in Photoshop, apparently it is against the Basic Editing rules to do so, so you must watch the perspective in the camera. Tilt can be corrected in post-processing.

My Heaven
by patio127

Comment:
Do the oceans flow to the right in your heaven?

Ascension
by riot

Comment:
Ascending to a blue ribbon?