Forked Tongue
by sher

Comment:
There is only one thing that I feel could make this stronger, and that would be a bit of more space below the white 'tongue'. Perhaps just 20 pixels or so. Great shot! 9 -danny

Duo
by lionelm

Comment:
Critique Club Comment:

Absolutely stunning. The colors of the flower are just breath taking. Your focus and your effective use of DOF makes this an interesting shot. I agree with one other commenter that the crop may work better as a square crop. I really can't see anything else that requires 'fixing'. This has all the ear marks of a professional shot.

Well done.

Afternoon Snack
by tcherring

Comment:
Nice. Simple and effective. Would a portrait mode, closer crop in on the kid have more impact? Also, a little boost in contrast would help bring out the texture in the wood. Still a very nice shot.

Diet Drink???
by kosmikkreeper

Comment:
I like the high key of this shot. The lighting on the background if more even so as to be completely white would really make this photo jump off the page. I like your crop and composition.

Neighborhood Candy Store
by BAMartin

Comment:
Now that is a lot of candy. Focus and white balance could be adjusted some to bring out the vibrant colors more. Another idea, would be a reshoot with just the containers in the background in the shot. Something more abstract in nature :-)

Find the Intruder
by Jacko

Comment:
Them darned skittles! :-)

Nice composition. I think the lighting might work better defused some. The highlights on the candies is a little bright. Otherwise, good colors and execution.

Sugar Bowl
by DennisF

Comment:
Good lighting, composition and colors. This is a pleasing shot. Well done.

Strawberry Cream Savers
by rj324

Comment:
Nice detail and composition. I like the lighting in this shot. Not too powerful, but strong enough for some nice highlights.

Colorful Lollipops
by jodiecoston

Comment:
Very pleasing composition. Your colors are bright but not oversaturated. Lighting is smooth and even. Good shot.

Uninvited
by sher

Comment:
Nice concept. Much like my stranger in a strange land entry. Your composition is very pleasing. I think the saturation of the yellow may be a little high, but still makes for a nice picture. High marks! -danny