Addiction Infancy
by krafty1

Comment:
The composition is fairly bland. The slightly military effect of the uniform lines doesn't seem to be as strong as it could be, maybe if all the shoes were white and you picked out one 'odd' pink pair with a short DOF perhaps?. the focus isn't sharp enough, the wall to the right of the shot doesn't serve any purpose, the shot could have been taken a bit to the left. I don't see how 9 pairs of shoes is an addiction also. It's hardly Imelda Marcos. The shoes are quite dinky and sweet, another idea... maybe a macro shot focusing on some of the cute details would have been more effective?

Tap Dancin'
by rjkstesch

Comment:
This picture could have been cropped right down to quarter it's current size; ie: the bottom left hand corner. As it stands the focus of the shot seems to be the dancers backside, since that's where the lighting seems to be aimed.

DANCING SHOES?!
by liesl

Comment:
I'm going to rate this very highly. The lighting on the legs and feet makes a strong form, and the contrast and black background creates a very powerful and sensual shape. I guess she was dangling from the back of a couple of chairs or something? That's how I would have done it. Which brings me to the 1 point I'll be marking down. The magical effect of the leading foot floating with the flip flop supporting all the weight could have been followed through to the back foot as well. Excellent photo, 9.

Milk - 1 Liter
by julesdv

Comment:
looks like a snapshot, out of focus, The backlit technique here makes the carton too dark while the background is given plenty of light. And the composition is poor. There's nothing for the carton to be balanced with. Maybe a shot from above playing with the idea of the carton camoflaging itself amongst what (from this angle) seems to be a tablecloth with similar colours to the carton.

A tall frosty one
by beaflies

Comment:
Very witty, and the kitten looks adorable. I love all the elements you used to evoke a frosty impression. A sharper focus on the eyes and whiskers would have helped.

't must be very hungry !
by kbhatia1967

Comment:
Not too sure what I'm looking at here. I like the composition nd texture though.

yum
by cyan

Comment:
Seems a little underexposed, and pulling out would help the viewer relax, and make the ice-cream more yummy

Milk
by Netwalker100

Comment:
The well placed focus on the milk, and i like the action in the composition.The best attempt at this theme I've seen.

Early morning summer breakfast
by mmusicante

Comment:
The milk and bottle should be lit better; ie: placing them in the shaft of light, since they're supposed to be the focal point. The writing on the bottle could have done with being pin-point focused as well. And the backgroung (table) is too busy.

don't cry...
by mesmeraj

Comment:
Haha, I wondered if someone would do this one. Very witty. Excellent use of DOF too.