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08/30/2005 11:54:33 PM |
| foregound lighting would help |
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08/26/2005 06:32:45 PM |
The background does weird things. :)
The lighting isn't perfect, too dark and too bright in certain places, it needs a better balance.
The composition is ok. The milk in the glass looks to warm compared to the milk in the bottle.
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08/26/2005 10:48:27 AM |
| The milk and bottle should be lit better; ie: placing them in the shaft of light, since they're supposed to be the focal point. The writing on the bottle could have done with being pin-point focused as well. And the backgroung (table) is too busy. |
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08/25/2005 09:42:10 PM |
| The table works well the the product label. Nice choice. That and using a strawberry and drawing the eye back and forth between that and the bottle. Well done. 9 |
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08/25/2005 08:29:16 PM |
| I don't like the background it's distracting. I also don't like how the milk looks so yellow |
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08/25/2005 03:01:49 PM |
| This looks very enticing. I like the pattern on the table how it blurs out and draws focus on the bottle. Refreshing. |
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08/25/2005 10:08:47 AM |
| Very seventies-ish. I seew parmalat and think of Italian lawsuits. It is too frenetic for the first time in the morning for me, but someone may need the jolt. |
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08/25/2005 04:51:11 AM |
| Good composition, but I would suggest more light on main subjects. |
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08/25/2005 12:48:03 AM |
| colors, composition and lighting are great! |
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08/24/2005 09:58:12 PM |
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08/24/2005 09:19:29 PM |
| I parmalat actually dairy? Not bad. |
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08/24/2005 06:54:02 PM |
| Cool table cloth. I don't usually put strawberrys on my milk, it's the other way around at my house. 7 |
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08/24/2005 11:40:08 AM |
| I love the table, but it is a bit too busy. Interesting placement of the strawberry. |
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08/24/2005 05:42:08 AM |
| Hey Brasil, right?! Nice shot... without the strwaberry it wouldn't be as good. |
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08/24/2005 12:46:51 AM |
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08/24/2005 12:22:23 AM |
Opa, alguém do Brasil mandando fotos tbém!
Gostei do foco na boca do copo, só nao gostei muito do background que vc escolheu! Tem foto minha ae também! hehehe
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08/24/2005 12:22:19 AM |
| The table top is way too busy since the label on the milk has alot in it as well. I'd put it on a solid white or black surface. Maybe not even have the bottle of milk at all, but just the glass, the spoon and the strawberry. Hope you find this helpful |
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