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| 03/16/2005 12:11:20 PM |
Black and Whiteby DanSigComment: Hello from the critique club !
Looking at this picture, I can't decide what your subject was? I believe its the ducks, but the emphasis is on the fence which is much brighter and attracts all attention. the ducks on the other hand are in shadow, the heads not showing, and no detail that I can see.
On the topic of Ansel Adams, this is not what his technique was about. He rather had emphasis on the subject and tried to make the surroundings divert attention to the main subject in different ways. the photograph should have more details and a range of tones.
On your submission, I think you can use some USM ( sharpening ) to bring a little more detail as the image resizing covers up the details.
Feel free to pm me if you have any questions.
thanks,
Gaurawa
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| 03/16/2005 10:52:08 AM |
Fear Notby librodoComment: The expression is great. A few things that bother me are the light/shadow on her hands. the effect looks good on the face, but one hand in light and another in shadow somehow doens't look that good to me. Also the catch light in her eyes.. they are distributed and are on the periphery which looks kind of odd.
But again I am no expert in portraits, just a viewer :) |
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| 03/16/2005 10:23:14 AM |
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| 03/16/2005 10:20:41 AM |
Snuggle Friendsby naomikComment: You have taken a bold step by using a border like this. I hope dpc voters accept it. good luck with the border :) |
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| 03/16/2005 10:18:37 AM |
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| 03/16/2005 09:37:26 AM |
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| 03/13/2005 01:01:58 AM |
Morning Storm Clearingby sharveyComment: the photo seems to lack contrast and high tone elements.... should have been a great capture with little more contrast |
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| 03/13/2005 01:00:35 AM |
Longs Peakby dacrazyrnComment: great tones.. i like the snow and fog (? ) on the mountain right between the dark regions..nice b/w effect |
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| 03/13/2005 12:59:46 AM |
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