decisions
by Len Scap

Comment:
Foucs on you looks a little soft

Balancing Act
by ClubJuggle

Comment:
Your hand seams a little out of foucs

En vert et rose
by Mambe

Comment:
Bluring the background would have helped so you dont see the folds in the sheet or just use shallower DOF

Skeptic
by neophyte

Comment:
I like the lighting you used.

Man Says "I am more worried about getting my next meal than this approaching tornado"
by fstopopen

Comment:
I really like this photo it is one of the few in here i really think fit the photojournalism topic. Good job capturing the storm and using flash to capture the man.

Best Buds
by Tranquil

Comment:
:: Critique Club ::

Well the colors in this photo are awesome I like the way the pedals really stand out on the blue background. It is a great sharp image with just enough depth of field. The crop on it works very well the only thing that might help me is if the photo was rotated just a hair CCW. the leaves do a great job leading your eye into the flowers as well. I am guessing this is a potted plant that you shoot on a paper background, but you did a great job giving it a outside feel. One thing I think that would really help to give this a new fresh feel is if you would have used a spray bottle to just mist the flowers a little giving it the morning dew appearance.

Great job with this photo, nothing to creative, but a technically sound photo.

..tick..
by stephenburton7

Comment:
Great job on this photo when I saw it I really liked it I am surprised you didn't do better. I really like the tight crop and good use of the rule of thirds. I think you did a great job with the Black and white here. Congrats on the first challenge hope to see more of you around here you did fairly well for a first entire.

dos centinelos (inspired by Manuel alvarez Bravo)
by AzCKelly

Comment:
:: Critique Club ::

I wasn't familiar wit the photographer at first so I googled him and am impressed with your tribute. It is very fitting to some of his photo I saw.

technical side I think your biggest problem here was your highlights. They seem to be blown out in a few spots. other then that I think you did a good job in the duo tone usage here. Your shadows could be lightened a bit on the tree to the right as well.

A different day where there are clouds or something in the sky to add more, that is one of the few things lacking interest here.I think it would help define some of the branch's that seem to fade into the sky now.

Imogen
by sarrobi

Comment:
:: Critique Club ::

You did a great job on this photo it has a simple yet elegant feel to it. The noise adds allot to the photo giving it even more character. One thing I think would have helped allot would be a little different lighting to add depth to the photo it looks flat without it. You really did a great Job on the D-Sat I love the white, grays, and black in it. It does appear to be over sharpened. But overall a great photo.

One more quick note I don't know how you do your borders but this one isn't even all the way around. The white border on the left looks a little thinner then the rest.
Here is a good tutorial on the subject that makes it real easy to get a perfect border.
Let me know if you have any questions on my critique feel free to PM me.

Bird
by srdanz

Comment:
:: Critique Club ::
This will be my first critique in awhile so I apologize if it doesn't cover everything. First I wanted to say this is an awesome capture great subject sharpness and shallow DOF. It looks lick a couple spots on his head and in front of his wing are blown out a bit but not so bad it hurts the overall picture. while i love the shallow DOF it feels like the bird blends into the background a little because of the light bird on the tan color background. Great positioning of the subject, I like how his wing leads you to him. Over all I say this is an above average photo that should have scored better than id did. Keep up the good work, let me know if you have any questions or comments about what I said.