Amber
by ClubJuggle

Comment:
Yep, definitely a transitional state. I like the composition with the wires, but it still doesn't leap out at me.

"Come on out guys ! Peck hard !"
by David Ey

Comment:
Very nice. Spoiled only slightly by the odd lighting.

Got Butter?
by karmat

Comment:
I think you should have risked your kitchen by trying to get some flying popcorn action.

The Circle of life
by BAMartin

Comment:
I presume this is a tombstone; I think it would be better to get some inscription in frame.

Home Improvement
by ss

Comment:
I guess what you're getting at is that the window on the left is newer than the right. The problem is that your dynamic range is too much for the camera so the left window is over exposed and the right one is underexposed. You could use a half neutral-density filter to reduce the contrast between the two, and get good exposure on both. Alternatively, you could add more lighting, or wait until the sun is in a better place.

Outside-In
by justine

Comment:
Interesting how the blinds give this a TV look.

33 years later
by Reuben

Comment:
This is a *really* good portrait. It seems very honest and captures character without undue effort.

Candles
by jonr

Comment:
The thing about red candles is that the flame makes the candles glow red; I think it should have been composed to show the effects of the light coming from the flames on the red wax.