The Earring
by saiphfire

Comment:
alot of potential here. Great comp that would lend itself well to text. However, It needs a larger piece or more emphasis on it as I'm really not sure what you're trying to sell. Great photo and lighting.

*
by Moose101

Comment:
I don't get it The shadows are great but the DOF and focus are not effective. comp is good.

The Black Pearl
by vasilkovaya

Comment:
So crisp and well defined! The comp is lacking and I see so much potential if only the shell were larger and flipped so the ring were inside the shell. the angle would show more of the ring. Your skills as a photographer would keep you in our palm pilot.

Entwined with Nature
by cheekymunky

Comment:
This is a great photo of jewelry, The DOF works for me but the background color may be tough to find a font color that stands out enough to deliver the message.

Suggestive
by mrmorris

Comment:
Very,very clever. However, You'll need a much crisper shot with enough contrast to really show the tiffany name to pull this off. very creative. Fonts need to be little looser (most don't know how to do this) but overall excellent job!

Take the Leap: Buy Me!
by dsidwell

Comment:
White text could be easily placed on this well composed, very crisp photo! Nice, job. ad ready.

Breakfast at Tiffany's
by OFreasier

Comment:
Having the piece go from the black to the white makes it difficult to show the details. The ad itself is original and well centered.

Southwestern
by vtruan

Comment:
Text gets lost. It could of used a black stroke of .5 point to really stand out. I like the font and the piece. The Dof and text mix wonderfully (putting the text in the out of focus area). Edit: I didn't know you can't use a stroke because its against DPC rules. You'd need a diffrent color font or background to get it to stand out. I really like the comp here.

Because You LOVE her
by RayEthier

Comment:
I like what you did here with DOF and placing the text in the out of focus area, i wish more of the necklace was in focus. You probably didn't need to get the whole necklace in but With the comp you used, you'd need a deeper field. The ring makes it crowded and seems out of place. Seperate the two or exclude the ring. I love the text and the font. It really jumps out at you.

Bob's Fine Jewelry
by strangeghost

Comment:
The comp here is fantastic, A different font, consistancy with punctuation (Artist license doesn't extend that far) and more contrast with the ring would be needed to make this a proffesional Ad. Great background and font.