Feather-like
by sekarmalathy

Comment:
Great lighting and product presentation. I'm sure what's being sold and the comp lends well to text possibilities. Very professional.

That "Special" Umbrella: Every DPC member needs one!
by tate

Comment:
Great comp. It would be easy to place text into this. Birds are a distraction but in the real world they'd be cloned out. My only thought is that this would need text to explain what's being sold, otherwise I'm not sure what the product is. I do see possible cool funny type ad potential with this photo. That's probably the most important thing. Nice work.

Musical Enjoyment
by taylorpage

Comment:
Great lighting and comp. Text could be easily placed. However,I'm not sure what the product is here.

Don't !
by Prime_Time

Comment:
I really had to look at this to get it. An ad should blast its message at me. Especially one as important as this. I think a deeper DOF would've had more impact.

Stella Artois
by vlado

Comment:
Nice job. I'm sure what's being sold and product is presented well. However I'd do one of two thiing with the DOF. I'd have the glass of beer in focus or place it further back for a better effect.

Smooth Jazz - 107.3 FM
by ErikV

Comment:
I really like the idea and the comp. The dark areas lend well for text placement. If this were presented to me I'd probably want to see this as a duotone in blue. But nice work overall.

Pearls before trolls
by snaffles

Comment:
Intersting comp and POV but I'm not exactly sure what's being advertised. Title doesn't help me.

Simplicity ExTOLLed
by karmat

Comment:
Nicely put together. I'm certain to whats being sold. I may of used a different POV and a bit more light to allow a tighter crop and a better view on the actual cookies.

Pearls of Perfume
by Scoman

Comment:
Color scheme and cop would work really well in a perfume ad. However, the soft focus on the cap detracts from the attractiveness of the product.

White goes with anything
by scotthadl

Comment:
Highlights are a little blown. This takes away from the appeal of the product as does the soft focus. I like the colors. They grab your attention.