View of an old car dealer
by CHIEFVOLS

Comment:
it should have been cropped in the bottom and may be a little sharper, but still it gives great feeling of an old movie poster. should have scored much higher, imho

Keeping The Secret
by JayWalk

Comment:
Oh no, the print is too small - how are we supposed to learn and improve here when stuff like this is being burnt in front of our eyes. provocation.
the photo itself is well composed. i wander how difficult it is to capture flames in front of black background (shall have to try). may be the hand should be slightly more lit.

Eye-Lined Beauty
by briantammy

Comment:
the eye-lining effect is truly intriguing... even makes the rest look like background (incl. too pale paleness on the right face)

Just A Girl
by LesleyNelson

Comment:
zooming in on the head would - imho - probably help (as well as a bit of exposure compensation to enhance contrast)

Look of despair
by bobdaveant

Comment:
the look is great, one of best so far. pity the rest is so overblown.

Depressed & Lonely
by cpickett

Comment:
great candid. stuff in the upper left is a bit distracting and may be a lighter color would add some contrast (?), but the mood is captured perfectly

Dark Lenses
by samtrundle

Comment:
great expression and everything, one of my favorites (I hope people wont care too much about missing "&"). The sporty sunglasses seem a bit inappropriate, but in the same time they make it more interesting, 9

Fun and games
by Chez

Comment:
great picture. cloning out the third (headless) person would probably help, but i quite like it as it is

Serenity
by gemeit

Comment:
great colors and really serene feeling. I could do without the frame (at least without large white frame) and I am not sure what is that line just under the mast of the smaller boat, but the rest compensates very well.

edit (after checking portfolio): the border looks good on the thumbnails and I like the consistency, but still I'd prefer it to be less strong

Message edited by author 2005-08-24 16:18:19.

RAWK
by BobsterLobster

Comment:
yeah. i feel the energy.