A simple tap.
by docpjv

Comment:
I wish it had more of a subject/ground dichotomy, the image is not resolving itself visually I think.

The Unseen Hand
by Skip

Comment:
Very appealing colors, but I can't pull any sense of order out of this chaos; what am i suppsoed to be looking AT?

A New Day
by photom

Comment:
needs sharpness and white balance work, to my eye.N icely composed, though.

A fine device
by jjbeguin

Comment:
Compositionally and conceptually I liek this a lot. It seems to me, however, that you've created a disconnect from right to left with the agressive background color shift.

Perpetual
by xcharrier

Comment:
Just too chaotic, too harsh and blocked up

Grandfather Clock
by fisheye

Comment:
Sweet, but I'm not sure I wouldn't prefer it with no blur; that aspect seems not to be working for me, in this case. Not sure why...

The Mechanics of a Tick
by scottwilson

Comment:
I wish to hell this were squared up vertically and horizontally; it only wants a smidgeon of rotation to accomplish. the motion is very very nice, as is the framing. Was the pure black groudn your best choice?

Music box
by GinaRothfels

Comment:
sweet image. a lot to like. I wonder isa the backgroudn a hair too bright?

Give it a Twist
by AChelton

Comment:
Awkward focus, poor white balance, fairkly arbitrary composition, all work against this.

The Old Fashioned Way
by GolferDDS

Comment:
I wish like hell the "horizon line" weren't parallel to and and tangent to the lowermost of the wires on the rearmost whisk (if that makes sense?). An overall sense of muddiness detracts a bit, even recofnizing the desire to "antique" this through sepia tonalities. One thing I notice is that the beater shows to best advantage in its reflection, not its actuality; a pity this isn't reversed...