Mandi1.jpg
by nomad469

Comment:
I would work on the pose a little mabey use a hair light and something to soften the lines on her face. If you can reshoot it I think if you took it from the other side it would look a lot better. There is some weird shadow across her face and on her hair on the right side. I think if you move the light source farther back it would help with harsh shadows and the low contrast levels. Watch how you convert it to black and white, there are many ways to do this is some work ALOT better than others. I like the model though and I like the vission you have for this shot, just change those few little things and it will "snap". Have you shown this shot to her yet? I bet she will love it

Dynamic Lines
by trnqlty

Comment:
nice shot but it looks very grainy and the darks are a little too dark

Dark & lonely road
by burtct

Comment:
this shot is vey very grainy and the image qualtiy is very poor. the use of on camera flash is what is robbing this shot of image quality

Day & Light
by cowcollect

Comment:
wow, this is very very grainy and the compostion just looks like a snapshot

Dreamy Lights
by jonasval

Comment:
wow, love the colors and the use of the star filter. I'm pegging this on as top three. the comp. is really nice and pulls the eye into the frame. The sky above the church and above the hill seems a little dirty but I don't think that will matter much

Duck Legs
by Jaimeson

Comment:
lol, thats really funny. This shot lacks in sharpness and I think that will hold it's scores back though

Darkness over Liberty
by nico_blue

Comment:
wow, great shot. Nice timing and nice framing. good shot

Dark and Long
by BigMo

Comment:
lol, nice use of d and l great job on comp and you did a great job on fitting the challenge. 9

Dandelions and Lillies
by beaflies

Comment:
wow, great image. It lacks in sharpness and the shadow of the thing in front of the flower is really distracting. Use some cross lighting to fix that, that is use a light source from the left and the right both at 45 degree angles. If that was just sharper and that shadow wasn't there this would be my pic for number one. mabey use a unsharpen mask next time

Diversity & Love
by Keith Maniac

Comment:
wow, love the concept. great job with the guy on the bike. I love this shot. on the tech. side it's overexposed by at least two stops and that is going to bring your scores way down