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Study of Self
05/28/2008 02:52:50 AM
Study of Self
by Citadel

Comment:
Good pose and composition. I'd like to see a version with more contrast in the subject (perhaps tweaking the grayscale conversion, also).
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What do Eyes See?
05/28/2008 02:51:03 AM
What do Eyes See?
by Shrink

Comment:
I like the juxtaposition of all the eyes, and the strong eye contact with the subject.
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Separation Issues
05/28/2008 02:50:36 AM
Separation Issues
by MichaelC

Comment:
Three of the four images are blurred. And I would like to see the images aligned better.
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Cardiologist Self Potrait
05/28/2008 02:46:20 AM
Cardiologist Self Potrait
by brayburn

Comment:
The heart is in focus, but the subject is not. And the heart is more colorful and more evenly lit than you are. Great idea and I like the lighting on you, but you just need to emphasize the subject more.
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Tender Loving Care
05/28/2008 02:43:34 AM
Tender Loving Care
by Drummond

Comment:
I find myself more drawn to the engine than the person, so this might work better as a portrait if you found a way to show more of the man and less of the background.
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Bass Cadet
05/28/2008 02:40:52 AM
Bass Cadet
by klkitchens

Comment:
Hard to "connect" with the bass player since I can't see his eyes, makes it tough to get drawn into the image.
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The way he looks…..
05/28/2008 02:38:02 AM
The way he looks…..
by gaurav

Comment:
A little unsharp, and pretty low-contrast. It's just a little flat and the subject doesn't really pop.
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Armani
05/28/2008 02:36:35 AM
Armani
by Miep

Comment:
Helps to have a model who is cut =) Excellent lighting. I don't like the angle, though.
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Smirk
05/28/2008 02:35:39 AM
Smirk
by littlegett

Comment:
A hair light from the back might help to separate the subject from the background a little more.
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Tribal Dancer
05/28/2008 02:34:58 AM
Tribal Dancer
by Jammur

Comment:
Great, interesting subject. I'd love to see a little more contrast, deeper blacks and whiter whites.
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