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06/03/2008 06:50:20 PM |
| Seems a touch out of focus... |
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05/31/2008 11:06:32 PM |
| Main focus seems to be on the heart, and less on the face. Maybe would work better the other way around. Good work, though. Very nice. |
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05/31/2008 10:54:48 AM |
| the colors seem a bit too red, and I can't really find a sharp point. maybe next time make the DOF from the man and the prop a bit more extreme, and sharpen things up after resizing |
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05/31/2008 04:33:51 AM |
| Would be a much better portait if the eyes were in focus instead of the heart. |
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05/30/2008 10:39:25 PM |
| The heart is in focus but he is not, that's the first impression I get. Maybe that's on purpose? Still, it's a portrait of a Male, not a heart. |
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05/30/2008 09:44:22 AM |
| Very intristing idea to use |
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05/30/2008 02:56:13 AM |
| it's hard to focus on yourself isn't it? i had the same problem. i like the prop. i think it would be even better if you held it over you heart |
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05/29/2008 03:37:24 PM |
| wish the focus was on the face instead of the heart, otherwise nice, good job with the catch lights |
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05/29/2008 04:59:08 AM |
| It looks like you've focused on the heart rather than the subject - a smaller aperture would fix this one. I do like the concept but the lighting is harsh on the subject (See the shadow from the nose) and would benefit from a reflector on the other side. |
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05/29/2008 03:07:28 AM |
| This could be a nice portrait, but having the heart in focus rather that the person doesn't appeal to me. |
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05/28/2008 07:54:57 PM |
| Hey Doc, the subject of the challenge should be in focus- not other parts of the composition. Without the plastic model, this photo with a tighter crop and sharp focus would have done very well, I think. The subject and lighting are great. 5 |
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05/28/2008 03:27:13 PM |
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05/28/2008 03:23:04 PM |
| The focus should have been on the face instead of the heart, in my opinion. Would have been a great shot! |
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05/28/2008 02:46:20 AM |
| The heart is in focus, but the subject is not. And the heart is more colorful and more evenly lit than you are. Great idea and I like the lighting on you, but you just need to emphasize the subject more. |
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