Image |
Comment |
| 12/15/2003 12:03:14 PM |
Waterlandby e301Comment: I really like the mood you have created with this shot. There are a couple of minor things you might consider for improvements:
My eye bounces from the looking down the river to the brighter gray in the top left corner. If allowed, you might want to burn top left so focus is more concentrated in the frame.
Maybe move to your right so you can frame with more to see between the trees and less of the bright gray on the left. I realize this may involve wading or swimming... remember to keep the camera high over your head. |
Photographer found comment helpful. |
| 10/28/2003 10:30:16 PM |
|
Photographer found comment helpful. |
| 10/28/2003 09:05:28 PM |
One's Companyby ImagineerComment: The like the simple composition of this shot and the nextrue of the wall/ledge behind the bird. |
Photographer found comment helpful. |
| 10/28/2003 08:58:54 PM |
Alone no more...by bruskiComment: I like the bold composition and the nice highlights on the gun. The arm may be a little blown out, but you could burn that in a little if the rules allowed. |
Photographer found comment helpful. |
| 10/22/2003 09:16:27 AM |
Sighby BlurryComment: The lighting on your subject is fantastic and I think you have definitely captured the mode of 'alone'. I subject's face says 'alone', so I think you could have cropped tighter and removed much of the door on the right. It's very good, but I think it has even more potential! |
Photographer found comment helpful. |
| 10/22/2003 09:03:25 AM |
The photographerby totiComment: I like this a lot, but I'll offer a couple of thoughts on the composition. The dark cloudy sky is great, but the hot spot at the top of the frame, sun behind clouds maybe, is a little distracting. A little less sky might have helped. The photographers head is 'split' by the horizon and camera lens is almost on the line formed by the dry shore meeting the wet shore. The MAY have been more dramatic with a lower perspective so the photographers head and camera rose above the horizon. I wasn't there, so none of this may have been possible |
Photographer found comment helpful. |
| 10/22/2003 08:49:12 AM |
One Chuck Roadby natorComment: I like this shot, but I think there is a little too much sky. You usually have the option of placing the horizon 1/3 of frame from top or bottom. Of course this guideline can be broke, but it is a good starting point. Since the depth of the road helps with the feeling of alone, I would have gone with less sky. Just some thoughts... |
Photographer found comment helpful. |
| 10/20/2003 08:20:12 PM |
Shades of Autumn by moodvilleComment: The lighting has a very natural early morning look to it, which I like. The branch sticking out of the container appears to be out of focus or soft when compared to the container itself, which seems to take away from the overall composition. |
Photographer found comment helpful. |
| 10/11/2003 01:05:09 PM |
Dreams of a photographer...by kosmikkreeperComment: First let me say that this is a really nice image, so take my comments as thoughts rather than negatives. The blue affect is slick, but the models shadow on the left is well defined which doesn't support the mode. I'm not sure why the camera is facing back, but that is probably just an artistic element that I'm missing, so no impact to score. I think I have some of the same photographer dreams, to bad I don't have the creativity to come through with an image like this. |
Photographer found comment helpful. |
| 10/11/2003 12:57:05 PM |
Catching the Faces of my Dreamsby NatatorComment: Cool image! I like the layered afftect, but the dream catcher is a little strong when compared to the face. A little less dream catcher or a little less light on it might have helped balance the two elements better. Great concept.... |
Photographer found comment helpful. |
Home -
Challenges -
Community -
League -
Photos -
Cameras -
Lenses -
Learn -
Help -
Terms of Use -
Privacy -
Top ^
DPChallenge, and website content and design, Copyright © 2001-2025 Challenging Technologies, LLC.
All digital photo copyrights belong to the photographers and may not be used without permission.
Current Server Time: 08/26/2025 01:38:45 AM EDT.