"Thing One and Thing Two"
by ace flyman

Comment:
From the Critique Club.

Simple images like this do not work on DPC. The image is flat, depth is a highly enhancing feature to a photgraph. The light from your flash is to powerful. The straight on look does not work either. The image does have a title that fits.

It could be inproved by changing the angle, try shooting tlaying on the ground looking up, or off to the side. As for the lighting I would recommend no flash. Try using a tripod for stability.

Travis

Have more fun in 2005
by sissi

Comment:
This photo has good Dof, but table shots are boring.

Kids and Basketball
by eaglebeck

Comment:
The photo has some digital noise, try using a lower ISO

Not To Be So Depressive
by sahko

Comment:
Wow this is one of the best in the challenge. You always take such excellent photos.

I love the pose and soft feel, the pose gives a seductive sexy feel. The colors work well with the softness, it blends the whole photo together. The border also works great with this. I can never get my borders to work.

The only thing I can nit pick at is the definition between the legs and th concrete post. But that may be my monitor.

This is a great photo I am sure it will be in the top ten. 10

More time looking; less time shooting
by e301

Comment:
One of the best images in the challenge.

#35......"To be a father she can look up to, with pride."
by parrothead

Comment:
I like the overhead shot

burn more calories
by hopper

Comment:
The left flame is slightly blown out, other than that I like it.

Pond
by pitsaman

Comment:
Excellent photo

Piggy
by kyebosh

Comment:
Great works well with the B/G

Leaving a trail of broken hearts
by dsa157

Comment:
Excellent color, The words could be a little sharper.