Broken in Death
by kervinchong

Comment:
When I view a photograph that is almost a 1:1 macro I expect to see detail of the subject. I feel your subject lacks the detail to make it stand out. Seems like the focus is very soft. Maybe a second light source from the left would of helped. I wish you well in this and future challenges.

Final Enticement
by angela_packard

Comment:
Nice picture of a performance however I feel it is a stretch on the challenge topic. You photograph is soft focus throughout and the lighting does very little to enhance the photo. A good photograph on it's own but as far as this challenge I feel it falls a little short. I wish you the best in this and future challenges.

Barn
by bowhenn

Comment:
Your photograph lacks in contrast very flat. The processing does very little to bring out the subject. I would suggest more contrast. I wish you the best in this and future challenges.

One Less Pot for Planting
by Elaine

Comment:
Very good photograph. I like the tight crop the tones and dof. Focus and lighting is nice. Great job

Ballpaint
by abuck

Comment:
A good stock shot. I do find the bright blue line distracting and maybe a deeper dof would of worked a little better. Seems to be a bit noisy.

Break Away
by Canadian_eh

Comment:
I'm looking around your picture trying to find a focus point but I can't. I feel the focus is off on your subject. Lighting is good but it could of benefited with a little contrast boost. As far as broken, you standing there have no problem seeing the broken in this shot but as a voter your composition makes it had for me to understand where broken fall within this photograph. Maybe a different POV would of helped. Good luck in the challenge.

Broken Innocence
by sarimili

Comment:
I'm not going to say it DNMC but I do think you went way out of the box on this one. With that said the focus is not where I feel it should be and soft overall. Here face should be sharp focus since you are using here as your subject in this photograph.

Guitar parts :-(
by Heidie

Comment:
A good stock photograph but seems a little flat. I think it could of benefited with a little more contrast. Good job

Broken and Homeless
by dleach

Comment:
I think you had a good concept but the picture is just bland. Not enough detail in the subject to show broken. Looks like noise was added to the picture and it makes it look flat.

Abandoned
by Odie

Comment:
Very nice subject but my eyes are having a hard time finding a focus point. May to much of neat image? I don't know but everything seems smoothened out and detail taken away.