Toothpicks
by ridvanerkan

Comment:
The highlights seem to be washing out the tips on some of the picks.

Fire of everyday
by joaoba

Comment:
Great lighting and clean background. The cropping feels a bit awkward at the bottom, as well as having the subject off center, yet not on the thirds.

The Wire
by dahlin

Comment:
This would be very cool is more of it were in focus... The blurriness really detracs for me.

Candy Colored Tape Dispensers
by dsa157

Comment:
I'd like to see a touch more depth of field to allow the foreground dispensor to be entirely in focus.

Hurt
by movieman

Comment:
I'm not sure you needed to select some of the words you did to make the point... Might have beena bit of overkill as I would have had the same photographic impression with a few of them left out or substituted. Also would have been more impactful to me to have the subject fill more of the frame and have the words closer together.

Free Wheeling
by admart01

Comment:
This image is overexposed - the highlights on the right cyclist's shirt are blown out. Onfortunately, a sa subject, this makes for a distraction. Might have been better to spot meter lower in the shot and take some underexposure in the trees.

... of Expression
by awpollard

Comment:
I think a b/w treatment in this image would help to eliminate some of the distractions - which are all in color.

Freedom from the City
by andywightman

Comment:
This shot has potential, but my initial thought was that there isn't enough contrast between the design elements. With the right lighting, or a more dramatic sky (sunset/sunrise) this would be vastly improved.

...No Worries, Just Fun
by L1

Comment:
I think a more open crop that expanded the beach scape would help the aesthetics of this shot.

Freedom in Play
by melismatica

Comment:
I love the shot, but it's very blurry. I've been trying to get one of these with my dog, but always run into the bluriness as well.