Under the rock umbrella
by Urho

Comment:
Just a tad too heavy on the shadows.

The New Adventures of Dorothy & Toto
by naomik

Comment:
Those heels would have certainly sunk in the dirt. ;)

Flowers are just a little too washed to be believable in the same scene.

"everything you can imagine is real"
by mariuca

Comment:
It almost works, but it doesn't come together quite enough to be believable.

Tomatoes factory
by clickodak

Comment:
Would love to see the colors and white pop more.

The Dream
by Judi

Comment:
A little less mist/fog for me.

sure realism
by Tiberius

Comment:
I would have liked to see the ground floor instantiated as a part of this instead of running it off the bottom.

always too soon
by tate

Comment:
Familiar scene, but still cool. Given the caption, it might have been better with a wardrobe change.

aquapollenation
by posthumous

Comment:
It sort of all falls in on itself due to the toning.

All is lost.
by KMcC

Comment:
Critique Club:

Well, this is interesting since I've drawn this to critique and already left a comment during the voting, so I'll expound on that.

Composition is OK. I find it interesting that you compressed the crop top-to-bottom. I mentioned the vignetting feels tight and perhaps more room above and/or below would have eased that. Original lighting looks to have been rather harsh, and your high contrast treatment doesn't necessarily help with that.

There's a lot of debris across the roof and on the porch, but there's also a lot along the side of the house hidden in the shadows. Softening the contrast might have helped you show a bit of that as well. As I mentioned, there's also an overtly bright spot on the roof (bare alluminium?) that draws the eye immediately - but there's nothing there. All this goes to say that there's no real subject here for the eye to be drawn to. I suspect you mean it to be the house, and if so, show the whole thing. Pull the shadows out on the side, burn in the roof a bit and get some evenness to the light. Then burn in the area in front of the house and the highlights in the trees and make the whole thing pop.

All that said, there's still a lot going on with the place and to show it in a way that makes you feel it and see it will take some work, particularly in a B&W conversion. Greyscale can make a lot of elements of different colors blend together, so you need to be careful with this and use a tool that allows you to adjust the sensitivity of your various colors in the greyscale image to get the definition you need.

Spending the time with this image you could have, as I said before, earned a lot better than the 5 I gave you initially, and the 6 that you averaged.

Eyes of a Child
by Ja-9

Comment:
Critique Club Comment...

First off, I like this image a lot. I suspect it didn't do better in a Free Study because folks tend to like something that pops more. There's also something about verticals that seem not to perform that well. In a portrait or B&W specific challenge I think this would have done better.

Compositionally there's not a lot of fault I can find here. I like that you went with a 5x7 crop instead of the 2:3 straight out of camera ratio. If I am bothered by anything it's the eyes, which is your subject based on the title. First off, they do not lie on any line of any of the classic compositional techniques, like the rule of thirds. Interestingly enough, had you gone with a 4:5 (8x10) crop ratio the eyes would have landed square on the top third line if you cropped off the bottom. It also effectively increases the relative size of the eyes within the borders of the photo.

The B&W conversion has retained some sparkle, but it's lost all definition in the irises. Plus the photo-left iris is darker than the photo-right. On my calibrated monitor it's nearly impossible to see the left pupil. The reflections are also very distracting against the dark irises. There's likely not much you can do about the reflection, but most conversion tools will allow you to play with color filters or color intensity and you should have been able to lighten them a bit so we could see the details. Otherwise they seem sharp and in focus.

Possible other improvements? The background could be found to be slightly distracting. Perhaps burning in the lighter triangle section of wall so that it blends in better with the darker parts would further bring the focus onto the eyes.

Again, it's a really nice photo that just needs a little more finishing. As one of the commenters points out, I think the cropping is what did you in on this one. Try the 8x10 crop and see what you think.