Fork Of The Future
by Kita

Comment:
Greetings from the Critique Club Kita!

First off, I think it̢۪s great that at 8 years old you are jumping into something like this.

I like what you are going for and the border works well with the photo. If I were shooting this I think I would have left it in landscape orientation. With the reflection it just seems like it should be landscape as forks standing straight up and left right reflections just don̢۪t feel right to me. I̢۪m not sure if the grain and the spots were intentional, but again, if I were shooting I̢۪d have used a shiny clean background. Also, the sharpness seems a little off. Did you use a tripod? If you did, you had some focusing issues, if not you should have.

Good idea done pretty well. I̢۪d have done a few things differently, but I̢۪m definitely not the expert.

I hope you find this helpful. If you have any questions or comments on my review please feel free to PM me.

Damn Mouse
by Baron152

Comment:
Clever idea, but not at all put together well and poorly lit.

Blue Ribbon for Swiss Cheese
by verg

Comment:
Interesting idea, but not put together really well and the lighting isn't very good.

You Are What You Eat!
by manic35

Comment:
Best shot of the challenge so far. Good use of rule of thirds. His eyes make the shot.

cheese smile!
by mapauleta

Comment:
Seems a little soft and if you could shoot it without the shadow.

Food Chain
by kteach

Comment:
Meets the challenge, but that's about it.

Got Cheese?
by fotomann_forever

Comment:
I can't figure out what my least favorite part of the photo is?

"Season's Grate-ings!" --- (Made from Mozzarella & Parmesan)
by espy2

Comment:
Clever, but there is a hair on his right arm. Probably wouldn't know it was made of chese if it wasn't on the title. Next time, maybe put the little "real" tag on it (that tag that is on all real cheese).

Four Stories High
by gbautista87

Comment:
Greetings from the Critique Club Garret.

I like the simplicity and the geometry of this photo, but I think it might be a little too simple. A straight up building, solid black sky, plain block lettersâ€Â¦ There is nothing that really jumps out and says wow. Maybe try it right after sunset with some interesting clouds? Or try a more interesting/unusual angle?
I do like the way the lighted parts frame the building, but did you know if dropped the aperture down to about 4 you̢۪d get some starburst from them and that might give the photo a little wow factor?

Miss You
by annah

Comment:
Greetings from the Critique Club Anna:

First off, I added you to my favs list because I realize I neglected to add you before. You are easily one of the best photographers on the site (in my opinion).

On to your photoâ€Â¦ I think it’s perfectly done for what you were going for. The lighting is perfect, the props are great and I like that you have the marker there by your hand (Green Day rocks BTW). And what a great idea! The photo definitely gives the mood of a love struck teenager separated from their love. The writing is like random thoughts, the differences in size shade and capitalization also makes it seem more random, really giving the photo that emotional touch. But a permanent marker? Ouch, I bet it was fun removing. Next time just use a washable marker and use the permanent one as a prop :)
While it̢۪s not a traditional greeting card with flowers or puppies, I do think it fits the challenge well and personally I like it better then the flowers and puppies. I don̢۪t shop for cards very often, but I know in the last few years cards like this are starting to pop up. Sending a card like this to someone would really get your message across.

Great job as usual. I always look forward to your next submission.