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Four Stories High
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Challenge: From the Ground Up II (Basic Editing III)
Camera: Nikon D70
Lens: Nikon AF-S DX Zoom-Nikkor 18-70mm f/3.5-4.5G IF-ED
Location: San Luis Obispo, CA
Date: Sep 26, 2005
Aperture: f/11
ISO: 200
Shutter: 30 sec
Galleries: Snapshot, Architecture
Date Uploaded: Sep 26, 2005

The Kinesiology building at my school.

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Votes: 213
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10/10/2005 10:22:44 PM
Greetings from the Critique Club Garret.

I like the simplicity and the geometry of this photo, but I think it might be a little too simple. A straight up building, solid black sky, plain block letters… There is nothing that really jumps out and says wow. Maybe try it right after sunset with some interesting clouds? Or try a more interesting/unusual angle?
I do like the way the lighted parts frame the building, but did you know if dropped the aperture down to about 4 you’d get some starburst from them and that might give the photo a little wow factor?
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
09/28/2005 11:27:23 AM
too dark
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09/28/2005 10:25:38 AM
Where is ground level in the photo?
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