Leading the Fly
by mitemouze

Comment:
good clarity. nice SI for Kids shot.

On a clear day
by jjbeguin

Comment:
good leading line. i would have liked to see more space after the figure

Bridge
by Mona

Comment:
nice idea with the shadows adding extra leading. something looks odd though with the slats in the shadow on the left. ohhhh, breaks in the slats, cloning takes patience grasshopper. i think you could have left the space, it would have broken the monotony of the lines. unfortunately the pic doesn't have much pop for me. perhaps a conversion to b/w would help your cause, as you do have some nice tones.

Inca Trail
by elsapo

Comment:
like your post processing, though some spots look a wee bit oversharpened. Really like the contrast in sunlight vs shade and how the shadow line mimics the hill line in the background

Girl Interrupting
by e301

Comment:
really like the b/w and noise. in my mind, that line from the bottom left is so strong, i can't help but wonder how things would have changed if you placed her closer to the top of that...that is if you had the ability to do so.

Thrill seekers
by sfalice

Comment:
good idea, but your composition has my eyes wanting to wander down the track away from the coaster itself. perhaps there was a view behind the coaster a bit as it headed down the next drop, that would allow me to better focus on your subject.

Spanning Time
by LucidLotus

Comment:
stunning. man on one side and nature on the other, and yet everything seems so balanced. i think the tone of the leaves at the bottom left really makes the shot work. of course the perfect technique didn't hurt either.

Cobweb Petals Leading to Center Stage
by dphillips

Comment:
nice focus choice. though, not sure if the cobweb or the title helps your cause. would have liked to see that extra petal at the bottom removed as it's a bit distracting.

Eyelined
by armelle

Comment:
good idea, but maybe the composition could have been bettered served without trying to get such a magnified shot which isn't this particular lense's strong suit. maybe instead of lines on the zebra , which i'm finding lead the eye away from your focal point, down to the bottom right anyway, you could have found lines leading the eye to the zebra(s). that adds even more irony. just some thoughts.

Summer Field
by Blim

Comment:
great lines. i'm wondering if this would look even cooler from farther back or with a wider lense...if possible. I think you need some more contrast and a hue adjustment