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by Donatien

Comment:
I like your depth of field here. I do feel a little out of balance with my eyr pulling right. The out of focus wheel is cropped, combine that with the void on the left, and I feel a little jolted. Move that camera six inches left for a balanced composition. I like it! 6

Wheels of Time
by bmat

Comment:
Nice photograph. I would frame even tighter and lose the the backgound in the lower right and left corners. 7

Forgotten Star
by jbeazell

Comment:
striking subject. I would would change my framing to to more of a standard rectangle, keep the entire subject whhel in the frame, put that center star on my right verticle third line and lose the hint of the other wheel on the left. 7

pinwheel
by cyborg

Comment:
What an interesting sillouette. I would play with this some to bring more brightness and color to the sky, then that pinwheel would really jump off the page. 6

Rustic Wheel
by candycorn

Comment:
Ouch!!!!!!!!!!! rule of thirds could have helped a very interesting subject here. 6

Silky Soft Strands
by brownt

Comment:
great compositipn, and a great attempt. Fishish the job of a silky water shot by finding a location without direct sun. Look how you silky water is perfect in the shadows, but your fucus returned in the light. Look for even light, without hotspots. Nice shot.

Mug Shot
by dustin03

Comment:
Here's a composition idea. For increased drama, point your mug hadle for the right top corner of your. Doing this would split your green space into triangles, instaed of squres. Human eyes like triangles.

Inner Sanctum
by TooCool

Comment:
I like your effort here with a realy difficult shot. I try this concept eveuy time that I'm in one of the grand atherdals, and their tough. It looks like have gone to great pains to acheive perfect cropping and balance, and still the viewer is pulled slightly to left. It feels kind of awkward, and I have no suggestions to give.

The colours between red and yellow
by Whiskey

Comment:
I tkink you a have a good concept here, and then lose something in the crop. What I think is intesting is the card fan and tha variety of vivid colors. I feel like my eye is being pushed up, and I find myself disaapointed when I run out of color. Good effort.

Fortune Magazine
by dsidwell

Comment:
I hope you win. This is a great image.