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| 12/17/2003 12:56:30 AM |
Simple Lifeby cbellerComment: This was a good idea! However, while it meets the theme topically, it doesn't meet it compositionally. The composition is crowded, and while there is a focal point (the person), they are partly obscured, bent over the other way, and facing the other way.
IMHO there were a number of ways to approch this. The key would have been to reduce the number of elements in the photo as well as capturing a portrait of the simple life. On the other side of the post would have been a good start. Catching just the one carriage, perhaps even as she pulled away, would have worked as well.
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| 12/16/2003 08:25:48 PM |
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| 12/16/2003 08:23:31 PM |
Simple bouquetby bormicComment: Good shot and design. Has it been desaturated? Looks a little on the green side, might be natural. But perhaps a little more saturation or yellow in the flowers would punch it up a notch. |
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| 12/16/2003 08:20:08 PM |
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| 12/16/2003 08:19:46 PM |
Simply a Vaseby ShelleyComment: Excellent shot and use of symmetry. I like the dark tones and richness it gives the colors. The centered composition seems ok here, but as long as you have that, you might have just gone for broke and make the vases fill the frame vertically as well, giving complete symmetry of the composition as well. |
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| 12/16/2003 08:16:46 PM |
The Simple Lifeby mirdonamyComment: I like the colors and composition. It might have been a good one to run through neat image on low settings to remove what looks like chroma noise in the light fur. |
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| 12/15/2003 12:34:13 AM |
Water into Wineby jaimeegrlComment: Funny--I had the same idea but never shot it, hated to waste good wine. I think having the glass more full would have been better, and of course watching for the water splashes (see the front right). Might have also been good to include the full glass, just for that class of elegance. But still a good and fun entry. |
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| 12/14/2003 08:46:42 PM |
The Shape of Bassby NazgulComment: Good compositiont. I am not sure why this shot doesn't have a good feel for me; I think it's partly the light and the sharpness. I compare it to the other guitar shot, where the light is soft; that has better aesthetics to me (if the person weren't there). The soft focus and light there adds a nicer tone; the wood here looks pretty unfinished and ragged. Also, the strap hook caught some light, and that doesn't complement the shape. I think perhaps this might have been better as a sillouette. Hopefully, you won't take offense--I know guitars can be special to people! Just offering some thoughts and suggestions to improve the shot next time! |
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| 12/14/2003 08:41:02 PM |
Curvesby BobsterLobsterComment: I like the capture of the guitar here and the ltght and tones. However, as a study of shape, the face/head distract rather than add. |
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| 12/14/2003 08:40:03 PM |
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