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| 02/25/2004 06:55:43 PM |
Inner Conflict: Battling Despairby mocabelaComment: An excellent composition and exposure, good choice of B&W. Some minor hot spots on upper forehead, but but IMHO the main problem is simply that your neatimage settings are too high, giving the skin a plastic look rather than just clean of noise. Also, you can see signs of oversharpening by the lashes and eye brow. |
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| 02/25/2004 08:45:10 AM |
1887 Graniteby cbellerComment: Greetings from the Critique Club:
Hits: This is a well composed natural gradient photo. The exposure looks about right. Sharpness is good and there isn't much noise. The overall tones have fine aesthetics.
Misses: Texture is downplayed here in the stone at this angle and with this light. The granite looks is pretty smooth, so it's really the engraving, the overall shape of the stone, and the clouds that represent surface texture here. And the engraving is not even very visible here.
Ideas. Perhaps another source of light from an assistant angled onto the stone would have brought out the engraving. I think a perspective shift might have made it more dynamic as well: perhaps you could have captured the stone angling on the diagonal of the shot, with an even sharper perspective. Or found a stone with a broken off area so an unsmoothed area of the granite were visible.
Nice picture overall! |
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| 02/25/2004 08:27:05 AM |
Shaggyby neilmwilsonComment: I didn't have a chance to comment on this during but I think it's a beautiful shot. I like the composition, colors and textures! I thought it was going to do much much better! |
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| 02/24/2004 09:32:07 PM |
Terracesby bobgaitherComment: Very nice! Good abstract. The effect works well, but or some reason it seems unclear (maybe just jpeg/resolution issues.) |
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| 02/24/2004 09:28:57 PM |
Showin' a Little Legby MrsFuzzButtComment: Nice, but why no head? I think if cutting the head off, perhaps I would have cropped even closer and that would give a bigger shot here with enlarged texture. |
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| 02/24/2004 09:20:03 PM |
Wooden Ladyby oksamitComment: Good subject; generall well captured, however, a polarizer might have gotten rid of the reflections and then you could have captured the nice wood texture (or you might have gone in the store). |
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| 02/24/2004 12:48:07 AM |
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| 02/23/2004 11:34:31 PM |
Leather Beltby bil99Comment: Well worn, good show of texture. The tones seem a bit light here, and I wonder if it might have looked a bit "richer" in color. |
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| 02/23/2004 11:33:34 PM |
AAHH..Nutsby tfarrell23Comment: Nice light and display of textures! One small crit: I find the amount negative space not helpful here, and would have personally liked a bit more of the peanuts in the frame. |
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| 02/22/2004 10:36:23 PM |
Coniston Waterby ImagineerComment: Wonderful light and composition. The highlights are just a bit too bright IMHO, but otherwise it's really fantastic. |
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