primary colors
by Gotchya

Comment:
this is just too much for me. digital defacing of my flag. 3

In a New York Moment
by dimitrii

Comment:
Critique Club Critique

Title: In a New York Moment, by dimitrii

Composition: You have an interesting composition, taken only by an experienced New Yorker. Having never been to NY, I probably would have been looking straight up and all of my shots would be from the low angle. Your perspective projects the definite feeling of the hustle and bustle of the big city from a point of view not normally seen in a postcard.


Technical: The intentional blur has a rewarding effect on the picture. You have used this effect to its fullest advantage to portray the feeling of the picture. Even with the camera movement to develop the blur, your focus appears to be dead on.


Challenge: You have an unconventional picture of the most popular city in the world. I am not sure if it would work to get people to come visit, or if it would cause them to stay away, but either way you have met the challenge in a very special way.


Suggestions: Your experience far exceeds mine and in my opinion you are a very good expressionistic photographer. I have no suggestions for your picture and keep up the good work. Thanks for sharing it with us.



Disclaimer:
Bear in mind that I am here to learn, just as many others and any comments that I have made are not intended to be offensive in any way, and are only constructive criticisms. If you wish to comment or discuss this critique please feel free to do so at any time.
Thank you,
Dick Pattee (Autool)
Autool@attbi.com

Got Till It's Gone
by arnit

Comment:
I spent a couple of days trying to get something like this. Congratulations and I too hope you share the technique.

After the Party...
by basia03

Comment:
This is a really nice shot. I especially like the use of a shallow DOF, and there is absolutly no sign of over processing. 9

Fragile
by greenem2

Comment:
A wonderfully clean and professional shot. You have done nothing wrong so it's a 10 from me.

neon night
by Gotchya

Comment:
It's hard to tell the difference between the subject and the reflections. Some may not think you hit the challenge but you are dead on IMO. good work. 9

Round and Round
by Jacko

Comment:
A superb picture. The rim of the glass is prominant enough for you to meet the challenge and the lady bug is placed just right to invoke interest. I have came back to this one three times and that is a ggod sign. 10

Emotion
by whitetiger

Comment:
This is a tough one. I can see you spent some time getting this, but I see room for improvement. The focus is off and might have been corrected with longer exposure and higher f-stop. Lint in the background, and cropping might have been better, in this case, if equal on all sides. 5

G & G
by labrynthe

Comment:
Nice idea with good colors. I think you cropped a little too close and I don't care much for the single stem just going out of the top center of the frame. 5

Got Till It's Gone
by arnit

Comment:
I always wanted to try something like this but didn't want to clean up the mess. Nice capture. 7